星光中学(Xingguang High School)近期举行了一次登山活动。假定你是学校英语报记者,请写一篇短文,报
星光中学(XingguangHighSchool)近期举行了一次登山活动。假定你是学校英语报记者,请写一篇短文,报道此次活动。内容包括:1.时间与地点:5月19日,青山(...
星光中学(Xingguang High School)近期举行了一次登山活动。假定你是学校英语报记者,请写一篇短文,报道此次活动。内容包括:1. 时间与地点:5月19日,青山(Qing Mountain);2. 活动的过程(如出发,途中,到达目的地等情况);3. 你对于这次活动的评论(感受)。注意:1. 词数120左右。2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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In order to encourage the students to take outdoor exercise, our school organized a mountain-climbing on April 10. Hundreds of us took part in it. It was a nice day. At 8:00 am, we gathered at the foot of Daqing Moutain and set out for the top in high spirits. All the way we were chatting, singing and laughing, enjoying the fresh air and the beautiful scenery. When some fell behind, others would come and offer help. About 2 hours later, we all reached the top. Bathed in sunshine, we jumped and cheered with joy. The activity benefited us a lot. Not only did it get us close to nature and give us relaxation from heavy school work, it also promoted the friendship among us. What a wonderful time ! |
试题分析:本文要求写一篇报道。报道一次登山活动。故时态使用一般过去时,人称用第一人称。首先写清写作目的,然后是时间,地点,人物,过程,包括如出发,途中,到达目的地等情况的介绍。最后写活动的意义,即对于这次活动的评论(感受)。文章比较容易入题。可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 【亮点说明】①高级句型结构的运用,如感叹句What a wonderful time及倒装结构not only...but also的运用。②好的短语:set out for出发,动身,着手做某事 in high spirits 情绪高昂fall behind落后③非谓语动词的运用句式赋予变化,如:Bathed in sunshine, we jumped and cheered with joy. |
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