Question

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A student proposes that university should publish professor evaluations online for everyone to read because it benefits both professors and students.professors can be motivated to improve their teaching and student can get informations about the classes they want to take.In the conversation, the woman disagrees with the proposal for two reasons.First,the professors would not be happy if their teaching styles are publicly critized Besides,they may even not read these negative criticism in them. So, they won't be influenced by evaluations and nothing gonna to change. Second, students who don't wish to spend too much time usually write the evaluations on the last day of the class and leave in a hurry. So, evaluations would not be specific or helpful about the class or professor.

谁能帮我修改一下这段话

Answer 1

我的修改是：
One student suggested that universities should open up online evaluation of professors so that everyone can use it, because it is good for both professors and students.

In this way, professors can be motivated to improve their teaching, and students can get information about the course they want.

People disagree with the proposal for two reasons.

First, professors will not be happy if their teaching styles are publicly criticized, and they may not even read these negative criticisms. Therefore, they will not be affected by the evaluation, nor will they change.

Secondly, students who do not want to spend too much time usually write comments on the last day of class and leave in a hurry. Therefore, evaluation will not help classroom or professors.

追问

谢谢，但是有些句子你改动了原来的意思了，比如这句话 a student 不是 one student
So, evaluations would not be specific or helpful about the class or professor.

追答

的确，还是a好一些。