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我现在初三，需要一篇英语作文，描写一件具体事例，分三段，60词以上。《i have changed

我现在初三，需要一篇英语作文，描写一件具体事例，分三段，60词以上。《i have changed a lot》月考需要啊。。之前自己写的那篇因为没有描写具体事例，所以分比较低

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I have changed a lot. I used to be short and fat, but now I 'm tall and thin. I used to be very quiet and shy, but now I'm more outgoing. I used to be afraid of speaking in front of many people, but I am good at speaking before people now. I like making friends with people since I have studied in No.1 Middle School.I used to stay at home all day on weekends, but I am interested in doing many sports now ,such as basketball, swimming,and so on. Do you think I have changed a lot ?

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这个不行的呀。。。要有具体事例，这篇作文只会得五分以下