短文改错One day on my way to home on the bus
Onedayonmywaytohomeinthe1.____busonawetdayandawomanwithadog2.____getonthebus.Itwasabi...
One day on my way to home in the 1.____
bus on a wet day and a woman with a dog 2.____
get on the bus.It was a big dog about 3.____
so big as a young horse and its feet were 4.____
very dirty. the woman said,"Oh!Conductor.5.____
Can he have a seat with the other passengers 6.____
if I bought a ticket for my dog?"The 7.____
conductor looked at the dog and saying, 8.____
"Certainly,madam.He canhave a seat like the passengers,9.____
but like the other passengers,he mustn't putits feet on it.10.____ 展开
bus on a wet day and a woman with a dog 2.____
get on the bus.It was a big dog about 3.____
so big as a young horse and its feet were 4.____
very dirty. the woman said,"Oh!Conductor.5.____
Can he have a seat with the other passengers 6.____
if I bought a ticket for my dog?"The 7.____
conductor looked at the dog and saying, 8.____
"Certainly,madam.He canhave a seat like the passengers,9.____
but like the other passengers,he mustn't putits feet on it.10.____ 展开
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1 去掉to
2 and 改成 逗号
3 got (主语是woman,单数)
4 把句首的so 改成as (只有否定中用so。。。as)
5 正确(那个the是你打错了打成小写的吧?貌似改错不出现这种错误的。。。)
6 把with 改成as (也就是想其他乘客一样,不是和其他乘客一起)
7 brought 改成 buy (此处不需要虚拟)
8 saying 改成 said (时态是过去时,与前面looked并列)
9 the passengers 之间加other (后文有提示)
10 mustn't改成can't (must的否定是can't)
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2 and 改成 逗号
3 got (主语是woman,单数)
4 把句首的so 改成as (只有否定中用so。。。as)
5 正确(那个the是你打错了打成小写的吧?貌似改错不出现这种错误的。。。)
6 把with 改成as (也就是想其他乘客一样,不是和其他乘客一起)
7 brought 改成 buy (此处不需要虚拟)
8 saying 改成 said (时态是过去时,与前面looked并列)
9 the passengers 之间加other (后文有提示)
10 mustn't改成can't (must的否定是can't)
lucy出品,质量有保证~
希望可以帮到你~~~
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1 没有to
2 没有and
3 got 过去时
4 把so big 改成 as big
5 句号后面首字母大写 The
6 other passengers 没有 the
7 把bought改称buy
8 saying改称said
9 把like改称with
10 把its改成his
2 没有and
3 got 过去时
4 把so big 改成 as big
5 句号后面首字母大写 The
6 other passengers 没有 the
7 把bought改称buy
8 saying改称said
9 把like改称with
10 把its改成his
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One day on my way to home in the 1._去to___
bus on a wet day and a woman with a dog 2.__对__
get on the bus.It was a big dog about 3._get-got___
so big as a young horse and its feet were 4._so-as___
very dirty. the woman said,"Oh!Conductor.5.___said-asked_
Can he have a seat with the other passengers 6.can-could____
if I bought a ticket for my dog?"The 7.__bought-buy__
conductor looked at the dog and saying, 8._saying-said___
"Certainly,madam.He canhave a seat like the passengers,9.like-with___
but like the other passengers,he mustn't putits feet on it.10._mustn't-can't___
bus on a wet day and a woman with a dog 2.__对__
get on the bus.It was a big dog about 3._get-got___
so big as a young horse and its feet were 4._so-as___
very dirty. the woman said,"Oh!Conductor.5.___said-asked_
Can he have a seat with the other passengers 6.can-could____
if I bought a ticket for my dog?"The 7.__bought-buy__
conductor looked at the dog and saying, 8._saying-said___
"Certainly,madam.He canhave a seat like the passengers,9.like-with___
but like the other passengers,he mustn't putits feet on it.10._mustn't-can't___
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1.to去掉
2.and去掉,改为逗号
3.get改为got
4.so改为as
5.the改为The
6.with改为like
7.bought改为buy
8.saying改为said
9the passengers.改为them,避免重复
10.its改为his
2.and去掉,改为逗号
3.get改为got
4.so改为as
5.the改为The
6.with改为like
7.bought改为buy
8.saying改为said
9the passengers.改为them,避免重复
10.its改为his
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1.去掉to
2。and改为逗号
3.got
4.so改成as
5.the改成The
6.with改成like
7.bought改成buy
8.saying改成said
9.passengers前加上the
10.对了。
2。and改为逗号
3.got
4.so改成as
5.the改成The
6.with改成like
7.bought改成buy
8.saying改成said
9.passengers前加上the
10.对了。
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