Question

请帮忙确认下面这段翻译（中译英）的语法跟时态上的问题，很重要的，希望能够专业点，谢谢！

Completed all of the quality evaluation of newequipment can increase greatly our plant capacity.
完成所有的新设备品质认定可以大大地提高我们的生产能力。

2. Completed the SPC tools import can ensuring our quality and customer audit.
完成这个SPC工具的导入可以保证我们的品质跟客户审查。

3. Completed the team building of PSI can effective toreduce the failed units .
完成这个PS的I团队建立可以有效的去减少不良品

4. Through the TS and ESD certification successfully canbring more customers.
成功地通过TS跟ESD认证可以带来更多的客户

Answer 1

1. Completing all quality evaluation of newequipment can greatly increase our plant's producing capacity.
完成所有的新设备品质认定可以大大地提高我们的生产能力。

2. Completing the input of SPC tools can ensure our quality and customer audit.
完成这个SPC工具的导入可以保证我们的品质跟客户审查。

3. Completing the team building of PSI can effectively reduce nonconforming units .
完成这个PS的I团队建立可以有效的去减少不良品

4. Successful achievement of the TS and ESD certification can bring more customers.
成功地通过TS跟ESD认证可以带来更多的客户

Answer 2

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