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秋瓷炫是一名女演员，她的外文名是Choo JaHyun。我非常喜欢她，因为她很漂亮，演技也很棒，我

秋瓷炫是一名女演员，她的外文名是Choo JaHyun。我非常喜欢她，因为她很漂亮，演技也很棒，我最喜欢看她演的电视剧，她演的【木府风云】是我最喜欢看的电视剧。。她出生于1979年1月20日，在韩国大邱。身高170cm，喜欢唱歌跳舞。
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Answer 1

亲是要写英语作文我的偶像吗
Choo Jahyun, is an actress.I like ner very much,for her pretty appearance and great performance.I like to watch her TV products,such as 《Wood house》。She was born on 1.20,1979 in South Korea.Her height is 170 cm and she likes singing and dancing best.
然后我之前也写了两篇作文：
Choo Jahyun,an actress who was born in January 20.1979 in korea.she grew up with her parents.she was a shy girl ,but she did well in study .When she was young,her mother sent her to learn taekwondo so that she can protect herself,she loved it and kept on practicing.when she was 18 years old .her parents’ marriage broke.although she lived alone,she never lost heart.She worked hard in order to go to college.The first TV play she did in China called <Scent of love>.
Now Jahyun is one of the most famous actresses in Asia.she has lots of fans . all of them love her because she is really good at
making performances and she always trys hers best to do everything. So do I. I treat her as my sister.I have learnt a lot from her.she is not only my idol,but also a good example in my life. Nowadays,more and more people advocate make track for stars,especially teenagers.But most of them make track for a star it's all because of the star's appearance.I'm not against I also make track for a star,but I pay more attention to their inner.My favourite star is Choo Jyun,who was born on January 20th,1979,a girl from Korea.Although she is not very famous（其实想用unknown,(*^__^*) 嘻嘻……),but she has made not a few films and television works,such as: Scent of Love,Life and Death Decisions ,etc.I'm through 《Home Seduction》and 《Happy Camp 》began to know about her, know her and like her.She is not the most beautiful,but she is different with other stars.She is very sincere, strong, optimistic, kind .She has a nice heart,she always remember to say "Thank you" to her fans------Porcelain doll after carrying off a prize.I treat her as my dear sister,she is all the Porcelain dolls' family.All of us are proud of her,because of her,we are happy.It is for her this special personality charm,I decided to take my lifetime to protect her.She gives me the power to go on, she teaches me to challenge the difficulties, she teaches me to be brave.She is not only my favourite star,but also is an example of my life on the road.

第二：
Do you know who is Choo Jahyun？Have you seen the TV play Home temptation？Oh,yes,she is LIN PINRU in it,She can also speak Chinese.
Choo Jahyun is known as the "SOWN WHITE" in Korea.
She was born in 1979.she is a Korean.She has a hard and sad life when she is teeanage.Her youngger sister died,because of drowning.Her sister is so lovely when she is alive.So Jahyun became very sad.For this reason,her parents were strict with her.Even if she felt tired everyday,she still hard-working,so that she got NO.1 in her school each time.She said she only wanted to make her parents happy and be pleased with her.
At the age of 18,Jahyun became a movie star in Korea.This was also her first movie"The clear and distinct young girl records successfully"（明朗少女成功记）.She suddenly had millions of fans.
But her parents wanted to break a marriage(离婚),to our surprise，when she knew this,she is tranquil(平静的),she said:"If you don't love each other any more,just break your marriage,it's ok,I'm 18 now,I can go to work to earn money，and take care of my self."
She was a sensible girl.Even if her parents havn't give her any money and support,she also be grateful to them.When she is about 28 years old,she have enough money and took her parents and thier new family to travel.They are so happy because of their good daughter.
Nowadays,Jahyun said:"I think the most avluable and important thing are relatives and family.I had less concern(关心) from my parents when I was young, but I really thank for them so much."
Yes,not only Jahyun,but also all of us,we should be stronger and more tolerant(宽容).They are the key of success

Answer 2

추자현 한 명의 여배우는 그녀의 외국어 이름 Choo JaHyun.나는 그녀를 매우 좋아한다. 왜냐하면 그녀는 매우 예쁘다. 연기도 잘 내가 가장 좋아하는 그녀의 연기를 드라마, 그녀는 연기한 【 나무 부 풍운 똑바로 내가 가장 즐겨 보는 드라마.그녀는 출생 1979년 1월 20일 한국 대구.키 170cm,, 좋아하는 노래 춤.

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不好意思，我要的是英文翻译