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短文改错。 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言

短文改错。 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词.删除:把多余的词用斜线(/)划掉.修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.My parents and I went to the park last Sunday. There were lots of visitors stand in front of theticket window. We waited a long time and buy three tickets. In the Tiger Mountain of the park, I was too eager to see the fierce frightened animals that I quickened my steps through the crowd.Unfortunate, I got separated from my parents. I had hard time looking for them, and I had no luck. Wandering in the park, I felt alone without any companions. Worse still, I had no money, so I had to walk to home, covering as much as 5 kilometer.

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My parents and I went to the park last Sunday. There were lots of visitors stand  in                                                                                                             1. standing front of the ticket window. We waited a long time and buy three tickets. In the Tiger                                                                               2. bought Mountain of the park, I was too eager to see the fierce frightened   animals that                                          3. so                               4.  frightening I quickened my steps through the crowd. Unfortunate , I got separated from my                                                             5. Unfortunately parents. I had ∧ hard time looking for them, and I had no luck. Wandering in the park, I                      6. a                                         7. but  felt alone without any companions. Worse still, I had no money, so I had to walk to   home,    8. lonely                                                                                                    9.   去掉 covering as much as 5 kilometer .                                10. kilometers