Question

2017年中考英语满分作文：The Person Who Has Influenced Me Mos

Answer 1

【写作要求】

　　学校英语社团在举办征文比赛，请你根据以下提示内容，写一篇题为“The Person Who Has Influenced Me Most”的英语文章。内容要点如下：

　　1. 对我影响的人是我的妈妈，她四十几岁;

　　2. 她总是耐心倾听我的问题，并建议我如何解决它们;

　　3. 作为一名医生，她常说再怎么仔细也不为过。她总是加班，把她的大部分时

　　间都奉献给了工作;

　　4. 所以，我认为她不仅是位好妈妈，也是名好医生。

　　5. 我希望 ……

　　要求：1. 内容须包含所有要点，语句通顺，意思连贯;

　　2. 词数90个左右;

　　3. 第5点的内容需展开合理想象，用2-3句话补充完整。

　　【优秀满分范文】

　　The Person Who Has Influenced Me Most

　　My mother is the person who has influenced me most.

　　She is in her forties. She always listens to my problems patiently. And she advises me how to solve them. As a doctor, she often says she can’t be too careful. She often works extra hours. She has devoted most of her time to her work. So I think she is not only a good mother but also a good doctor.

　　I hope I can be a person like her. I also hope she will pay more attention to her own health. She’d better have more time to relax herself.