Question

请各位高手帮忙看下下面这句英语翻译有没有什么问题？有的话怎么改？非常感谢！——————— 1.

请各位高手帮忙看下下面这句英语翻译有没有什么问题？有的话怎么改？非常感谢！———————

1. 8月份QC发现12件线垂，同7月份相比较是呈现什么趋势？主要集中在那些Package？
QC has found 12 disturber wire in Aug, and what is the trend than Jul ? Which package is the main issue for that ?

Answer 1

有的
首先，disturber应该是打扰者的意思
其次，than 用于比较级，这里改改为compare with

追答

我查了一下，线垂是指铅垂线的线垂吗，那应该是线垂
The vertical line

最后一句大体上没问题

Answer 2

1. 8月份QC发现12件线垂，同7月份相比较是呈现什么趋势？主要集中在那些Package？
   QC has found 12 disturber wire in Aug, and what is the trend than Jul ? Which package is the main issue for that ?

QA has found 12 disturber wire in Aug, what is the appearing trend comparing to Jul? Which is the package that caused most of the issue? (Which is the package that experience most of issue?)

Answer 3

第二句我觉得有问题 它比较的是七月的线垂和八月的线锤 而你写的是七月和八月比 应改为and what is the trend than those in Jul？

Answer 4

"线垂" 是什么？"Vertical Line"?"disturber wires"?

"The QC has detected 12 xxx wires in August. Compared with July, what is the trend? Mainly detected in which of the packages? "

Answer 5

wire不要用复数吗？

追答

What is it tend to be compare with July?

追问

不懂…

追答

同七月想比是呈现什么趋势可以用我上面那句
然后第一句的wire要改成wires