Question

请人帮忙改写英语作文

假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Peter 曾表示希望来中国教书，你校现需招聘外教，请给他写封信，告知招聘信息。内容主要包括：

1、教授课程：英语口语、英语写作、今日美国、今日英国等。

2、授课对象：高中生（至少三年英语基础）

3、工作量：

-----每周12学时，任选三门课

-----担任学生英语俱乐部或英语校报顾问（advisor）
此为范文
Dear Peter,

I remember you told me you were interested in teaching in China. Our school now is looking for a native-speaker to teach somen courses to senior high students. If you come, you can choose three of the following four courses: Speaking, writing, Britain Today and America Today, and teach 12 hours a week. The students who are going to take these courses have at least three years of English learning experience. Besides teaching, you will also work as an advisor to our students’s English club or our school’s English newspaper.

Please let me know if you are interested and if you have any other questions, I’d be more than happy to help.

请帮忙改写一下，大致内容不变，用词用句改一下，感激。

Answer 1

Dear Peter,

I remember you informed me about you were interested in teaching in China. Our school is now looking for a native-speaker to teach some courses to the senior high students. If you are able to come, you will be given options to choose the following four courses: Speaking, writing, Britain Today and America Today. Your working time will be 12 hours a week. The students who are attending these courses will have at least three years of English learning experience. Besides teaching, you will also be working as an advisor for our school's English club or the English magazine editorial.

Please let me know if you are interested in and please be free to ask any other questions, I am certainly happy to be able to help you.

Answer 2

In my memory,you told me your interest in teaching in China. Our school now is searching for a native-speaker to teach some courses to senior high students. If you would like to, you can choose three of the following four courses: Speaking, writing, Britain Today and America Today, and teach 12 hours a week. But ony the students who have at least 3 years'English learning could choose these courses. Except teaching, you will also take the role of an advisor to our students’s English club or our school’s English newspaper.

Please get me informed if you are interested and have any other questions, Helping you is my pleasure.

Answer 3

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