Question

英语改错，麻烦

I've been in Canada for two months.This is the first time that I've been away my family for such a long time.With the help of Katia,a roommate of me,I've soon got used to live without my parents around.Katia,like many other Russian girls,are nice and lively.We became friends shortly after we meet each other.Although her English is a little hardly to understand,we enjoy chatting and we usually talk a lot about our own family.We're both surprised that Chinese culture or Russian culture are so different.Now,we are planning a small party for the next Sunday.There,Katia will introduce me to some of her friends, one of who has been to China several times.I just can't wait.
只有一处添词，一处删词。总共有十处错误。

Answer 1

this改it

away后加from，
me改mine，
live改living，
are前加who，
这句没错

meet加with，
her前加for，
hardly改hard，
enjoy改like，
family改families
surprised后加of
or改and，
a前加源手on或者for，兄源
china后加for

基本可以保证羡裂态全对，欢迎同行来指正。

追问

还是不行啊，只有一处删词，一处添词，共有十处错误。很急，可快些否

还是不行啊，只有一处删词，一处添词，共有十处错误。很急，可快些否

还是不行啊，只有一处删词，一处添词，共有十处错误。很急，可快些否

追答

一处删词，一处填词，这才两处啊，其他的八处都是改词吗？