Question

这句话有没有语法错误

1. This bank book can only be the evidence for checking the accounts, which can neither be used as the certificate of deposit nor be used for mortage.

Answer 1

语法
(1 ) 1个bankbook 有多少个account
如果只有1个
则原文accounts应改为单数accunt

(2) 有错字
mortage并错
应当是 mortgage

用词方面(不是错误,只供参考)
1 bank book是否指银行存折
可参考用passbook
2 the evidence for checking the accounts
是什麼意思
是户口的证明吗
如果是
可以考虑不用checking
the evidence/proof of the account(s)

Answer 2

可以的。

Answer 3

This bank book, which can neither be used as the certificate of deposit nor be used for mortage, can only be the evidence for checking the accounts. 个人觉得这样改句子就更明晰，否则容易搞混which到底指代book还是account。供参考。