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请英语高手 帮我看下这段语法错误,谢谢

Besides, people tend to be positive toward this world after they reads good news stories of celebrities ,especially of their idols. If one reads his superhero goes to the gym every morning, he or she is likely to get up early and work out either. Young people tend to imitate the behaviors of others. And typically, those iconic figures possess some good qualities, such as persistent and diligent , that the public like. For instance, Michael Jordan, a well-known basketball player, affects many teenagers. They are greatly inspired by Jordan when life is at low ebb. Some of my classmates subscribe their idol’s Facebook account and read any reports or posts of their idols now and then to obtain positive energy about them. By watching their videos, my classmate Joe told me that he realized the joy of fighting and became more industrious in his academic performance. Obviously, it is beneficial for people to know what happened about the people they care about.

Form the above analysis, I believe people should read news and current events everyday and do not get rid of this part of their daily life, since they could become more wise and have a positive outlook on life.

Answer 1

Besides, people tend to be positive toward this world after they read（no "s" ） good news stories of celebrities ,especially of their idols. If one reads his superhero goes to the gym every morning, he or she is likely to get up early and to work out either. Young people tend to imitate the behaviors of others. And typically, those iconic figures possess some good qualities, such as(:) persistent(persistence) and diligent (deligence) , that the public like. For instance, Michael Jordan, a well-known basketball player, affects many teenagers. They are greatly inspired by Jordan when life is at low ebb. Some of my classmates subscribe their idol’s Facebook account and read any reports or posts of their idols now and then to obtain positive energy about them. By watching their videos, my classmate Joe told me that he realized the joy of fighting and became more industrious in his academic performance. Obviously, it is beneficial for people to know what happened about the people they care about. Form the above analysis, I believe people should read news and current events everyday and do not get rid of this part of their daily life, since they could become more wise and have a positive outlook on life.

Answer 2

they read, 不是they reads
superhero going 不是superhero goes。
too不是either。
persistence and diligence。不是persistent and diligent。
Which the public like。不是that the public like。
From而不是form。

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谢谢帮助，请问为什么不是either
Which the public like。不是that the public like。 还有这个，为什么，谢谢

然后除了语法有什么别扭的表达之类的吗，请指出。谢谢，哪些地方需要改进呢？