Question

英语作文五句话《my friend is john》

Answer 1

（1）这篇比较短小,词汇量也不大
Hello!I'm Amy.I have a good friend.Her name is
ZhangYun.Her English name is Betty.She is a Chinese girl.She is ten
years old.She is in the No.5 Primary school.She is in Class 7,Grade
2.She is good at English.She likes Chinese ,too.She is kind and very
friendly.She likes helping others.She likes singing and playing
basketball.This is my good friend.Do you want to know more?
（2）这篇语句不错,有点长但是可以删减的很好
I
have a friend.Her name is Candy.She is twelve year old.She has black
and short hair.She has a little mouth,two big eyes.She is so cute.Her
mom and dad love her.She has a happy family.Her friends like her too,So
she’s happy every day.
She is a student of Yi Zong Fu Xiao.She is in
Class Four Grade Six.She studies very hard.English is her favourite
subject.She likes to speak English.She can speak English very well
now.She always says “Learn by doing.” So she thinks speaking is very
important in learning English.
We are very busy studying when we are
in school.But on the weekend,we are free.We often do homework together
on Saturdays.After that,we can watch TV at home.Sometimes,we play
games.We have the same hobbies.She likes riding bikes and watching TV
and so do I.Her favourite sport is swimming.She’s very good at it.She
often teaches me how to swim in summer.
I like her very much.I am lucky to be her friend.
（3）这篇适中
I
have a good friend.Her name is Wu Mi.She is thirteen years old,But she
is short.She has big eyes,a small mouth,a small nose and a round face.It
is very cute.She likes reading books and do manually.Her skillful
hands,can make a pleasant surprise.I like her very much,because we are
good friends.