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A Tour Diary
Last week, I visited Hangzhou and went to a lot of places.
Hangzhou is one of the most beautiful cities. And there are many places of interest. Everyone likes to come here. And it is famous for West Lake. The West Lake is very beautiful. Yesterday, I went boating on the West Lake. I saw there are many fish. Then, I visited the park close to the West Lake. In the park, there were some birds in the trees. Many people flew kites with their friends. I enjoyed myself yesterday.
I felt very happy. I hope I can visit Hangzhou again.

Answer 1

A Tour Diary
Last week, I visited Hangzhou and went to a lot of places.
Hangzhou is one of the most beautiful cities. And there are many places of interest. Everyone enjoys beautiful scenery here. And it is famous for West Lake which is very charming. Yesterday, I went boating on the West Lake,what's more, I saw a variety of fishes. Then, I visited the park close to the West Lake. In the park, there were all kinds of birds in the trees. Many people flew kites with their friends. I enjoyed myself yesterday.
I felt very happy. I hope to visit Hangzhou once again to enjoy the beauty and richness of life.

Answer 2

I saw there are many fish.——are 改成were
Many people flew kites with their friends--- Many people were flying kites with their friends happily.