Question

根据所提供的信息，写一篇关于你的朋友的英语短文。（开头已给出）要求： 1．字数60字左右。 2．内容全面

根据所提供的信息，写一篇关于你的朋友的英语短文。（开头已给出）要求： 1．字数60字左右。 2．内容全面，表达完整流畅，可适当发挥。 3.文中不出现真实姓名、学校名称等信息。否则不得分。

Answer 1

I have a good friend,Jenny Smith. She is 13 years old and her birthday is October 28 th . There are four family members in her family, her parents ,a dog and she. She is fond of blue and green,but dislikes yellow. She likes chicken and ice-cream,but dislikes eggs. She is crazy about tennis,but dislike soccer. On Monday morning she is busy. from 8:00 to 12:00, she has science class,English class,math class and a basketbal game. She is interested in science , English and the basketball game ,but hates math. At twelve ,she has lunch.

试题分析：这是一篇提纲作文。本文主要介绍好朋友的年龄、生日和喜恶。全文主要用一般现在时态。 【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，例如用 be fond of,be interested in,be crazy about等短语来表达喜欢，避免like重复使用；多次使用并列句如She is fond of blue and green,but dislikes yellow. She likes chicken and ice-cream,but dislikes eggs. She is crazy about tennis,but dislike soccer.，使文章层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。