Question

求把这文章准确地翻译成英文，100分

不要网上的在线翻译！

我来自蒙古，从小在中国长大。中小学都在中国学校上学，但看到贵大学学生都来自各个国家，从中我考虑到各个国家的人都有不同的想法以及见解，要达成相互理解的话最有必要的就是多多的交流，可惜我现在的周围环境中还尚未有这样良好的环境，与多国家的人交友是我现在的一个理想。我想在大学掌握好英文以及俄罗斯语和西班牙语。

我个人认为现在的地球环境处于相当恶劣的状态，现在看似地球本身没什么大碍，但是据专家提倡地球崩溃的日子也不遥远了，我从小时候所爱慕的那些优美环境在世界上一个个减少。我便想到了，绿色环保知识的重要性。我毕业后想为这方面做贡献，学习绿色环保知识。普及大规模的风力发电，减轻现在全球大规模的沙漠化。然后再去研究回收的知识，减轻地球上繁多的垃圾。这些都是需要相互理解的。我想成为在商务领域成为掌控一切的烹调大师，为了这个我必须进入贵大学，想从你们一流的教师学习，与一流的学生们共同学习。

Answer 1

I'm from Mongolia , but born, grew up and went to primary and secondary school in China.I see the students of your universtiy come from different countries, so I think that people from different countires have different ideas and insights. It's most necessary to reach a mutual understanding by communication and exchange.But unfortunately I have not yet been in such a good environment. Making friends with people from many countries is one of my ideals. Besides English, I want to master the Russian and Spanish at the university.

Personally, I think the current global environment is in very bad condition, now the earth itself seems has nothing serious, but the day on which the earth collapses according to the experts' prediction is not far from present.Those beautiful sceneries I've admired since childhood are extinguishing all over the world. It makes me think of the importance of environmental protection knowledge. After graduation , I want to contribute myself to this field, learning environmental protection knowledge,popularizing large-scale wind power to reduce the current global extensive desertification, then back to the learing of knowledge of recycling, reducing waste on the planet range. These all need mutual understanding. I want to be a " master chief" who control all the cooking in the business field. To reach this destination, I have to enter your university, to learn from your world-class teacher together with the world-class students.

提些个人意见：
你这个短文是用于大学申请函吧？短文中，你表达了在大学四年里的愿望：
1。学习英语、俄语、西班牙语。
2。从事环境保护的学习并毕业后致力于此。
3。成为商务领域的精英人士。
单独拿出以上的一条，想在四年里学成都是不容易的，想要发展成事业都需要一辈子的精力。而作者想在大学里完成以上所有愿望，还不包括交际的时间和精力，恐怕是不切实际的。
建议作者集中某一个领域展开阐述，删除其他领域的想法，以免给校方造成好高骛远、夸夸其谈之感。如果我是校方，我会感觉作者想法很多，目标却并不明确，根本没有什么实质的计划。这对第一印象及其重要。
个人观点，仅供探讨。

Answer 2

I come from Mongolia, grow up in China. Schools are in Chinese school, but see your university students from various countries, I consider each country has different ideas and opinions, to achieve mutual understanding is the most necessary of communication, but now I have yet to the surrounding environment so good environment, and many countries are now making an ideal. I think in the university English and Russian grasp and Spanish.

I personally think now in a bad environment, the earth, the earth itself doesn't seem now, but experts advocate the collapse of the day, I also not far away from the desire that when a beautiful environment in the world. I think, the importance of green environmental protection knowledge. I think that after graduation to contribute, learning the green environmental protection knowledge. Popularization of wind power, reduce the massive global scale desertification now. Then go to study knowledge, reduce the recycling of waste on earth. These are need to understand each other. I want to be in the business of all control become masters of cooking, and for this I must enter your university, to learn from your teacher, and the first-class first-class students learn together.

Answer 3

I come from Mongolia, grows up since childhood in China. The elementary and middle schools go to school in the Chinese School, but saw the expensive university students come from each country, I considered each country the human have the different idea as well as the opinion, must achieve the words which understood mutually most to be necessary is the exchange very much, what a pity in my present's environment also not yet has the such good environment, makes friends with the multi-country's person is my present's ideal. I want to grasp English as well as the Russian language and Spanish in the university.

I thought that present's terrestrial environment is at the quite bad condition, now looked that resembles the Earth itself anything not to obstruct greatly, but according to the expert advocated the Earth collapses the day is not remote, I these exquisite environment which admired from the childhood in world each one reduction. I have then thought that green environmental protection knowledge importance. After I graduate, wants to make the contribution for this aspect, the study green environmental protection knowledge. Popularizes the large-scale wind power generation, reduces now the global large-scale desertification. Then studies the recycling again the knowledge, reduces on the Earth many trash. These are need to understand mutually. I want to become in the commercial domain become control all cook master, for this I must enter the expensive university, wants from your first-class teacher study, to study together with the first-class students.

Answer 4

你是要申请大学吧，加油哦~~~很认真帮你翻译的，保证零错误~~
I come from Mongolia and grew up in China since childhood. I went to Chinese elementary school and middle school, but I find that students in your university coming from different countries .Judging from the various ideas and opinions different nationalities may have, the key to achieve mutual understanding lies in the necessity of communication. The pity is that I’m not able to have such a good atmosphere in my living place at present, but I cherish the hope that I can communicate and make friends with people from different countries someday. Therefore, I plan to master English as well as Russian and Spanish during university years.

From my point of view, the global environment is already in a bad condition .Although it seems that there is nothing wrong with the earth now , it is also advocated that the day when the earth collapses is not far away according to the expert. The environment that I have been appreciating since childhood is becoming less and less. Then I came to realize the importance of green environmental protection. Therefore I want to make contribution in this domain and study the green environmental protection knowledge after graduation. Popularizing the large-scale wind power generation and reducing the global large-scale desertification is part of my plan. Then I’ll continue to study the recycling knowledge and how to reduce the great amount of trash in the earth, which all requires mutual understanding. I want to become the chief master who can take control over everything in the business domain, for this reason I must enter your university. Only in this way can I learn from your first-class teachers and study together with your first-class students.