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I know it's extremely poor.This topic is same to my TOEFL composition.
Question：People attend college or university for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge). Why do you think people attend college or university? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Here we go!
Nowadays, after students graduate from senior high school, most of them will enter a university or college. In my opinion, there are three reasons which make students go to the college.
Above all, people who graduated from senior high school haven’t enough social experience and ample knowledge. The knowledge of high school isn’t of adaptation for modern society. A person, who graduated from senior high school and doesn’t be educated from university, can’t adapt to society which is different between student’s lives. For getting more experience and improving abilities, they must go to the more high level school, college or university.
Second, for getting a good job in future, they have to study in the college. You can see that a number of persons who graduated from senior high school can’t find a good job after they graduated. In this few years, the statistics shows that the new graduated student is more than vacant jobs which can earn a lot of money many times in China. Facing this terrible data, graduated from senior high school students have to enter a university for getting a higher level diploma. That is an important reason which is that students want to be educated in the colleges.
The third one is for dream and ideal. When we are young, all of us have a plenty of fantastic dream. For example, some of us want to be the superman to beat the evil persons for justice or be a famous scientist to do many interesting experiments and invent significant things like Newton and Edison. Dreams and ideals are the magic things which can bring hope and motivation. Making us never give up. Entering the university is short way to make your dream coming truth. So It’s a reason that why student want to study in a college.
Therefore, entering a university or colleges indeed is a brilliant way to help you being success and give you something that you want.
如果你是写高中作文什么的，你就使劲删~！！这篇作文有325words
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我知道这是非常poor.同我的话题是托福作文。
问：人们上大学为很多不同的原因或大学（例如，新经验，职业生涯做准备，增加知识）。 你认为人们为什么上大学？ 请给出具体原因及实例来支持你的答案。
在这里，我们走！
如今，当学生从高中毕业，其中大多数将进入大学或学院。 在我看来，有三个原因，让学生去学校。
最重要的是，人们谁从高中毕业，没有足够的社会经验和丰富知识。 高中的知识，不仅对现代社会的适应。 谁从高中毕业，也不是从大学教育，无法适应社会，学生之间的生活有所不同。为了得到更多的经验，提高能力，他们必须到更高一级学校，学院或大学。
第二，在未来获取好工作，他们在大学学习。 你可以看到，谁的人数从高中毕业找不到好工作后，他们毕业。 在这几年的统计数据显示，新毕业的学生比空缺职位，可以赚一笔钱多次在中国多很多。 面对这一可怕的数据，从高中毕业的学生要进入一个更高的水平获取文凭的大学。 这是一个重要原因是学生要在普通高校的教育。
第三个是梦想和理想。 当我们年轻，我们都有一个梦幻很多。 例如，我们一些希望成为超人击败正义邪恶的人或者是一个著名的科学家做了许多有趣的实验，像牛顿，爱迪生发明意义的事情。 梦想和理想是奇迹般的事情，可以带来希望和动力。 Making us never give up.让我们永不放弃。进入大学是短暂的方法，使你的梦想来的真理。所以这是一个就是为什么要研究学生在一所大学的原因。
因此，进入大学或学院的确是一位才华横溢的方式来帮助你成功，正在给你的东西，你想要的。
Question：People attend college or university for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge). Why do you think people attend college or university? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Here we go!
Nowadays, after students graduate from senior high school, most of them will enter a university or college. In my opinion, there are three reasons which make students go to the college.
Above all, people who graduated from senior high school haven’t enough social experience and ample knowledge. The knowledge of high school isn’t of adaptation for modern society. A person, who graduated from senior high school and doesn’t be educated from university, can’t adapt to society which is different between student’s lives. For getting more experience and improving abilities, they must go to the more high level school, college or university.
Second, for getting a good job in future, they have to study in the college. You can see that a number of persons who graduated from senior high school can’t find a good job after they graduated. In this few years, the statistics shows that the new graduated student is more than vacant jobs which can earn a lot of money many times in China. Facing this terrible data, graduated from senior high school students have to enter a university for getting a higher level diploma. That is an important reason which is that students want to be educated in the colleges.
The third one is for dream and ideal. When we are young, all of us have a plenty of fantastic dream. For example, some of us want to be the superman to beat the evil persons for justice or be a famous scientist to do many interesting experiments and invent significant things like Newton and Edison. Dreams and ideals are the magic things which can bring hope and motivation. Making us never give up. Entering the university is short way to make your dream coming truth. So It’s a reason that why student want to study in a college.
Therefore, entering a university or colleges indeed is a brilliant way to help you being success and give you something that you want.
如果你是写高中作文什么的，你就使劲删~！！这篇作文有325words
Translated by Google.
我知道这是非常poor.同我的话题是托福作文。
问：人们上大学为很多不同的原因或大学（例如，新经验，职业生涯做准备，增加知识）。 你认为人们为什么上大学？ 请给出具体原因及实例来支持你的答案。
在这里，我们走！
如今，当学生从高中毕业，其中大多数将进入大学或学院。 在我看来，有三个原因，让学生去学校。
最重要的是，人们谁从高中毕业，没有足够的社会经验和丰富知识。 高中的知识，不仅对现代社会的适应。 谁从高中毕业，也不是从大学教育，无法适应社会，学生之间的生活有所不同。为了得到更多的经验，提高能力，他们必须到更高一级学校，学院或大学。
第二，在未来获取好工作，他们在大学学习。 你可以看到，谁的人数从高中毕业找不到好工作后，他们毕业。 在这几年的统计数据显示，新毕业的学生比空缺职位，可以赚一笔钱多次在中国多很多。 面对这一可怕的数据，从高中毕业的学生要进入一个更高的水平获取文凭的大学。 这是一个重要原因是学生要在普通高校的教育。
第三个是梦想和理想。 当我们年轻，我们都有一个梦幻很多。 例如，我们一些希望成为超人击败正义邪恶的人或者是一个著名的科学家做了许多有趣的实验，像牛顿，爱迪生发明意义的事情。 梦想和理想是奇迹般的事情，可以带来希望和动力。 Making us never give up.让我们永不放弃。进入大学是短暂的方法，使你的梦想来的真理。所以这是一个就是为什么要研究学生在一所大学的原因。
因此，进入大学或学院的确是一位才华横溢的方式来帮助你成功，正在给你的东西，你想要的。
参考资料： My brain.
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