Question

书面表达（共25分）。假设你是李华。你的朋友Tom打算来重庆游玩，来之前想让你先给他写封信介绍一下重庆

书面表达（共25分）。假设你是李华。你的朋友Tom打算来重庆游玩，来之前想让你先给他写封信介绍一下重庆。请你根据下列提示给他写一封信。1．地理位置：中国西南部2．占地面积：八万多平方公里3．人口：三千多万4．著名景点：大足石刻（the Dazu Rock Carvings）,长江三峡（the Three Gorges）等。5．重庆是现代化大都市。。。。。注意：1，信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 2，词数100左右Dear Tom, I’m delighted to hear that you are going to visit Chongqing.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours, Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Tom, I’m delighted to hear that you are going to visit Chongqing.Chongqing, where the Yangtze River and Jialing River meet, is situated in the southwest of China. Covering an area of over 80,000 square kilometers, it has a population of more than thirty million. Besides, there are many world famous places of interest, such as the Dazu Rock Carvings, the Three Gorges, which attract millions of tourists from all over the world. Nowadays, Chongqing, which is developing with high speed, is the biggest international city in China in terms of area and population. People here are very kind, warm and friendly to every visitor from any corner of the world. I believe you will enjoy your visit in Chongqing. I hope to meet you soon. Yours, Li Hua

试题分析：考查应用文中的书信的写作。同时也属于提纲类作文，向你的朋友Tom写封信介绍一下重庆。要点都已经给出，审题时注意本文使用一般现在时，描述时可以以要点时为顺序，也可以适当加工要点，但运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出。难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用省略句，倒装句和强调句型准确表述。象范文里面的where the Yangtze River and Jialing River meet, is situated in the southwest of China. 和Covering an area of over 80,000 square kilometers, it has a population of more than thirty million.都不失为好句子。 点评：提纲类短文的关键在于要点要全面包括，不能有遗漏和省略。同时注意谋篇布局的顺序，运用合适的连接词连接全文，同时选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采。