Question

请高手帮写一篇英语作文

题目为：should students bring mobile phone to school。
分3段来写。
第一段：表明观点应该带手机还是不应该带手机。
第二段：根据你所表明的观点说为什么应该带或者不应该带。
第三段：再次明确观点。

文章不用很长、只是希望不要有语法错误、谢谢了。

Answer 1

Can students bring cell phones to school学生上学可不可以带手机，如果说题目自拟的话，我觉得这样比较OK

第一段： Students may bring cell phones to school学生上学可以带手机 （Students should bring cell phones to school）学生上学应该带手机

第二段：First: Students attend school, parents do not do not worry, so easy to contact parents of the child, the； second: if it does not care what had happened can call for help；Third: facilitate communication, not get lost
第三段：Will not affect school learning with cell phone, a personal own problems, so we think that mobile phones can bring to school

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Answer 2

Although most people can realize the importance of English in modern life. Mastering English is quite difficult for them, Why? Because they don't find out a suitable way to learn. I state you about the way to learn English I think it is the best. It is combination of two factors: learning inside the class and learning outside the class.
Learning inside the class is very necessary for learners for experience, a good environment for practicing and motivation of studying. Firstly, you should take part fully in class to get knowledge from teachers who can share their valuable experiences for studying English with us, and they also give comment or feed back about your mistakes if you have , they can explain about what you don't understand the English lessons. Second, class is good environment for studying, is where we can communicate with your friends in English and check your knowledge level, beside when you learn inside the class, you have competition with others, which make you have more motivation for studying but joining in class every day isn't still enough time for your practice to become a good learner. You should spend more time on practicing yourself at home.
Learning English outside is also important. You can study English online at home with threes reasons: not spend much fees, have suitable lesson for each person and have more interesting for lessons. First learning English online at home, which decrease fees for us and don't much time for moving, second there are many kinds of lesson which are suitable with each learner's level, there are courses for beginners, both adults and children, as well as more advanced courses for those who work their way up through the lessons. The advanced lessons are also suitable for those who do have the basics of the English language and want to increase their skills in reading, speaking, listening and writing. Thirdly, having many funny activities from English online course. It makes learners more interesting for studying. For example, play funny games such as play cards, puzzle, crossword, or hangman. Moreover, you can watch English film, listen to English news, read English newspaper or chat with native speakers.
Many people have the idea that learning English is a difficult process. In fact, the opposite is true and the language is really easy to learn if you spend time on practicing it everyday with above method. You will become a good learner English.