Question

especially用法问题

这两句话都有什么语法错误？应该用现在进行时，还是一般现在时？especially能如此用么？逗号后面是否能直接跟一般现在时？
1,Many college student，especially those in big cities，are spending lots of their spare time in dealing in stocks.
2.Many college student，especially those in big cities，spend lots of their spare time in dealing in stocks.
应该是students，写错了

Answer 1

Especially不用在句子或从句的开头，You would usually say 一般都说：Young people especially need plenty of sleep（NOT不用Especially young people need plenty of sleep）.（年轻人尤其需要充足的睡眠。