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谁能帮我看看这段英语文章有什么语法和时态上的错误，谢谢。

谁能帮我看看这段英语文章有什么语法和时态上的错误，谢谢。I had eight days off on National Day ，because my family is a bit far away from school, I decided to spend my vacation in school with my roommate. October 1st, my roommate and I went to the south campus of our school to play, I found the south campus is much bigger than our north campus, the building will be a lot more, also we had dinner in the xueyuan restaurant went back to the dormitory. My roommate and I went to bed very late every night so we spent the morning in our sleep. After we wake up, we went straight to lunch. I didn't travel as much as others during the eight day holidays, but I also felt fulfilled. This is my National Day vacation.

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I had 8 days off during the National Day Holidays. I decided to stay at school with my roomates since my home is far. On October 1st, my roommate and I went to the South Campus of our school. The South Campus is much bigger than the North Campus. There are more buildings as well. We had dinner in the Xueyuan restaurant before we went back to our students' residence. We went to bed late and woke up late in the next morning. We went to have a breachen and enjoyed it. I did not spend time travelling during these holidays, but I still feel fulfilled. This is how I enjoyed my National Day Holidays.