Question

短文改错On one day,when I was at a cafe（咖啡馆） in Honolulu（檀香山）I saw sailor watching a

bright young woman carefully.The woman looked quite sadly.He walked toward her and starting searching for anything on the ground at her feet.Before long,she asked him if he has lost something.The sailor turned very serious,"yes,"he said,"I'm looking for a smile was lost."Slowly there had a smile on the woman's face.That sailor told her what was just the one he was looking for.

Answer 1

去掉on， sadly改为sad， starting 改为stare，  has改为had， smile前加which， had改为was。

Answer 2

On one day ---One day
saw sailor ---a sailor
sadly--sad
anything--something
a smile was lost--a smile which i lost/a lost smile
there had--there was

what---that