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Wejusthadagoodnationaldaylongvacation,manystudentsmustusetheholidaytosetfootontheirow...
We justhad a good national day long vacation, manystudents must use the holiday to set foot on theirown journey, then surely you on these scenes inthe familiar. Look, this is the holiday season on theroad because of too many private cars caused by trafficjams, the scene is very spectacular. If it is me, certainly willnot choose to go play in such a busy day, I wouldrather stay at home watching the tourism satellite TV.
Traffic jams not only affectour travel itinerary, also caused numerous other aspects of problems. For example: an increase of people commuting time and the reducesd working time caused the reduced work efficiency and the economic loss,as well as increased traffic accident
Traffic congestion has increased fuel consumption, air pollution. In the face of a series of problems, there are still many people drive their cars travel, this is why? Let us work together to have a look of their reasons.
1. The development of the economy
2. With the herd psychology. Now more and more peoplebuy cars, not as long as the economy is not allowed, manypeople can't resist the desire to buy a car. And thecar was considered a status symbol, in vanity andpush to follow the trend of the psychological, many peoplewillchoose to buy a car of his own .
3. The backward public transport Now many busfacilities are and shabby, the ground also dirty, letalone in a crowded bussmelling all kinds of strangetaste, that feeling is really very bad. Secondly, theshifts of the bus is insufficient, from the starting far peoplechoose self driving travel reason.
4. By this improving the quality of the life Everyone has the desire of trying newthings . the car is a lot of people’s pursuit of a better life.Bydriving we can enjoy the self driving tour, needn’t behard to squeeze into a bus or subway.
So what measures can be taken to against these public reason?
Traffic congestion has become a worldwide urbandiseases, countries around the world to take measures to dealwith the traffic jam. We can learn from the management experienceof foreign countries, according to the situation of ourcountry develop concrete measures.in my opinion,there are severalfollowing approaches.
1. Strengthenthe city traffic construction
2. improve the public transport system
3. the country issue the relevant policies to limit carbuying 展开
Traffic jams not only affectour travel itinerary, also caused numerous other aspects of problems. For example: an increase of people commuting time and the reducesd working time caused the reduced work efficiency and the economic loss,as well as increased traffic accident
Traffic congestion has increased fuel consumption, air pollution. In the face of a series of problems, there are still many people drive their cars travel, this is why? Let us work together to have a look of their reasons.
1. The development of the economy
2. With the herd psychology. Now more and more peoplebuy cars, not as long as the economy is not allowed, manypeople can't resist the desire to buy a car. And thecar was considered a status symbol, in vanity andpush to follow the trend of the psychological, many peoplewillchoose to buy a car of his own .
3. The backward public transport Now many busfacilities are and shabby, the ground also dirty, letalone in a crowded bussmelling all kinds of strangetaste, that feeling is really very bad. Secondly, theshifts of the bus is insufficient, from the starting far peoplechoose self driving travel reason.
4. By this improving the quality of the life Everyone has the desire of trying newthings . the car is a lot of people’s pursuit of a better life.Bydriving we can enjoy the self driving tour, needn’t behard to squeeze into a bus or subway.
So what measures can be taken to against these public reason?
Traffic congestion has become a worldwide urbandiseases, countries around the world to take measures to dealwith the traffic jam. We can learn from the management experienceof foreign countries, according to the situation of ourcountry develop concrete measures.in my opinion,there are severalfollowing approaches.
1. Strengthenthe city traffic construction
2. improve the public transport system
3. the country issue the relevant policies to limit carbuying 展开
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We just have had a good long national day vacation.
you are surely familar with these scenes .
不想看了……好长
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