Question

请找出下列句子中的错误并加以改正。急急急急急！！！！！

1、I'm using the pen which he bought it yesterday.
2、Is that factory which your father once worked in?
3、The man whom I spoke is from Canada.
4、July1,1999 is the day when we'll never forget.
5、l still remember the holidays I stayed with them.
6、I'm going to work in the hospital where needs me.
7、Those that haven't been to the West Lake will gather at the school gate.
8、I don't like the way which you talked to your friend.
9、This is the last time when I've given your friend.
10、Soon they came to a farm house,and in front of which sat a small boy.

Answer 1

第一个去掉it。第二个which改成where。第三个is前加to。第四个when改成that。或者forget后加it。第五个对。第六个where改成that。

追问

第五个为什么对？
那七、八、九呢？

追答

七八九没有发吗？我补上去了啊。第五个我觉得它不缺成分，那就是加when？第一个有which作宾语不需要it。第二个不缺成分用where。

Answer 2

1、I'm using the pen which he bought yesterday.
2、Is that factory the one that your father once worked in?
3、The man whom I spoke to is from Canada.
4、July1,1999 is the date which we'll never forget.
5、l still remember the holidays when I stayed with them.
6、I'm going to work in the hospital where i am needed.
7、Those who haven't been to the West Lake will gather at the school gate.
8、I don't like the way in which you talked to your friend.
9、This is the last time that I've given your friend.
10、Soon they came to a farm house, in front of which sat a small boy.

追问

可以告诉我错在哪里吗？

追答

1. it多余，已经被which代替了

2. that factory是主语，句子缺先行词

3. speak to sb.

4. the date 做forget 的宾语

5. holidays做stayed with them 的状语

6. hospital做从句的状语

7. 先行词是those只代人做主语必须用who

8. in the way固定用法 

9. 先行词有序列词next last first修饰用that 

10. and用来引导并列句，既然有了which引导定语从句，and就多余了
    

Answer 3

1,把it去掉
2、which变that
3、spoke后面加to
4、when 变that
5、I前面加when

追问

剩下的呢？？？