Question

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作为即将毕业的学生，要你提点意见给学校，说说学校的一方面

中文如下，大家觉得哪里不好可以改一下，在译成英语

亲爱的校长，作为即将毕业的学生，我想向您提一些关于学校需要改进的地方，来更好地促进学生与学校的发展。就我而言，我认为学校的教育方式不尽人意。
在我看来，学习应是个快乐的过程，然而，在我印象中，学校却扮演了一个不停宣传并教导学生死读书的角色，同学们在学习时，只模仿书本上的内容，忽略了加入自己的想法和实践能力。当然，事物都有两面性，老师也是助长这个现象的原因，。也许，在传统老师的观念里，不停地做题与读书，是确保考试成功的有效途径之一。他们便让学生买许多额外的教参书，是指变为机器人。
众所周知，“行动胜于空谈”，我们不仅要学习书本上的知识，也要经历社会实践。因此，学校要适当增加一些社区活动，增强学生的动手能力。使我们更深刻的理解生活和体验生活。同时，这离不开老师的帮助，学校可以每年多增加教师出国的机会，学习国外的教学方式，再结合自己学生的特色，形成新型教学，使课堂变为一个活跃的、快乐的园地。

Answer 1

Dear President, as a graduate student, I want to ask you something about school areas in need of improvement, to better promote students and the development of the school. As far as I'm concerned, I think the school the education mode unsatisfactory.

In my opinion, learning should be a happy process, however, I'm impressed, the school has played a non-stop propaganda and teach students the role of dies studies, students in learning, only imitate books, the contents of the neglected to join his idea and practice ability. Of course, there are always two sides to everything, everything the teacher can also contribute this phenomenon, the reason of the. Maybe, in traditional teacher idea, keep doing the topic and reading, to ensure that there is one of the effective ways of success in the examination. They then let students to buy a lot of extra teaching reference book, it is to point to become a robot.

It is well known, "actions speak louder than words," we should not only learn book knowledge, also want to experience the social practice. Therefore, the school to appropriately increase some community activities, strengthening students' practice ability. Make us more profound understanding of life and experience life. At the same time, it cannot leave the teacher's help, schools can more each year than increasing teachers' the chance of going abroad, study abroad way of teaching, combining themselves student's characteristic, forms a new teaching, make the class into an active, happy plateform.

Answer 2

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