Question

英语作文请大家帮我改一下语法错误，用（ ）把错误括起来，满分15分请打分

Now with the development of the society . Happiness is becoming more and more important. The students have different view about the happiness. Some of the students think money lead to happiness because they can buy and do everything if they have enough money. Some of the students think health result in happiness some of students think wealth bring happiness because they can bring their partents to travel all over the world and have spare time. However I think knowledge is the most important thing because knowledge is power and you will do much for mankind. Different people have different views onhappiness . What do you think?

Answer 1

我对此不是很精通，不过我的同学在新东方上了课后。新东方给了他们一张“批改卡”。是新东方旗下的一个专门批改作文的网站：新东方批改网。你可以看看

Answer 2

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