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Teacher Zhao grew up in Beijing, she went to primary school in Fang Cao di school. In the place that she lives, live many persons who have knowledge, this has the very deep impact on her. During in the primary school, she not only is a good student but also take active part in extracurricular activities. She also holds a position of school. When she at a junior middle school met big frustration, but she never give up her study, after went to Northeast to be a teacher, and at the same time also progressed with her students. While being teacher, has also to actively participate in productive labour,she without fear of hardship and dirty. Under the arduous conditions, she the psychological withstanding ability and the adaptiveness is strong, the will is tenacious, from not easily to difficultly lowers the head. The new teacher soon won the respect of his students. She has a unique style, her students like her class very much. Coming into the city, she worked primary school by herself to fund. She is conscientious and like her work. She job is to teach Chinese, while write a composition, she will organize students to see rain, according to raining of true condition, let the students write a composition. In this way, could make composition becoming more correct, more vital and richer each time. She not only looks after the student's study but also looks after the student's life ，she regard her student as herself kids, she help her student to correct an error by themselves and love student resembles loving her is same, good-tempered. After several years, she was been designate as president, she is more greatly attached to her work.

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由于时间较紧张所以就不一一指出每衫腊模野处的修改以及理由，改好的文章如下~
你可以自己对照一下哈~不过木木本人也难免有小疏漏，仅供参考啦

Teacher Zhao grew up in Beijing, she went to the Fang Caodi Primary School as a pupil. Where she lived, there lived many people with knowledge, which had a deep impact on her. When she was primary school, she was not only a good student but also an active one in extracurricular activities. As well, she held an important position at school. When she was in junior middle school, she met a big frustration, but she never gave up about study. She went to Northeast and became a teacher, during which time she gained progress together with her students. She also took part in physical work, regardless of hardship and dirty.Under the difficult condition, She showed her strong psychological ability of withstanding and adapting with her firm will. Therefore she never lowered her head . As a new teacher, by her unique style, she won respect and popularity of her students soon. Having come to this city, she also lives by herself in primary school. She is still conscious, with her love of her work. Her subject to teach is Chinese. And when she teaches students to write compositions about rain, she usually organizes them to observe the real rain and write the true feelings. That method has made the students write better and more correct compositions, even more vivid and bright. What'或码滑s more, besides helping them in studying, she often regards her students as her own children. She helps them with their own fault and keeps loving them with kindness. After these years' outstanding work, now she has been designated as our president, and furthermore, she has become more attached to her job.