Question

英语短文改错 每行有一个错误。谢谢大家了！

one of my unforgettable memory of my school in （）
xinjiang is that of lunches we bought form our homes. （）
i hold my lunch—box in my hand when i was going to （）
school.the smell from it was very good .since the lunch （）
bell finally rang ,my friend aigulie was used （）
to share her nang with me.nang is a specially kind of （）
cake in xingjiang.i like them very much.now aigulie and （）
i study at different colleges or we can only see each other （）
during the summer vacation .I think over her a lot and i miss （）
the food and the good time we had together （）

Answer 1

memory -> memories
bought -> brought
was going -> went
since -> when
was -> \
specially -> special
them -> it
or -> and
over her -> her over
最后一行应该没问题

Answer 2

one of my unforgettable memory of my school in （memories）
xinjiang is that of lunches we bought form our homes. （from）<===brought？打错字？
i hold my lunch—box in my hand when i was going to （held）
school.the smell from it was very good .since the lunch （since改成when）<===不确定
bell finally rang ,my friend aigulie was used （删去was）
to share her nang with me.nang is a specially kind of （special）
cake in xingjiang.i like them very much.now aigulie and （them改成it）
i study at different colleges or we can only see each other （or改成and）
during the summer vacation .I think over her a lot and i miss （over改成about）
the food and the good time we had together

追问

不好意思，第二行的form是手误打错的。应该是from…

追答

那把bought改成brought
这短文确实有点生硬，不好理解。
倒数第一个think of比较好- - 思念,over改成of
最后一行had改成enjoyed？

Answer 3

memory: memories
bought: brought
going: on the way
it: the lunch box
去掉finally
a specially kind of: a kind of special
them: it
or: and
over: about
had together : had been together

Answer 4

one of my unforgettable memory of my school in （memory-memories）
xinjiang is that of lunches we bought form our homes. （form-from）
i hold my lunch—box in my hand when i was going to （hand-hands）
school.the smell from it was very good .since the lunch （from-of）
bell finally rang ,my friend aigulie was used （was删掉）
to share her nang with me.nang is a specially kind of （specially-special）
cake in xingjiang.i like them very much.now aigulie and （them-it）
i study at different colleges or we can only see each other （at-in）
during the summer vacation .I think over her a lot and i miss （over-about）
the food and the good time we had together （had-spent或者删掉together）

Answer 5

1. memory ----memories 2.is ----was 3.in-----with 4.from ----of 5.was 去掉 6.specially-----special
7.them *------it 8.or----and 9.over ----of 10.we 和had 中间加一个have. 只供参考~~~~

Answer 6

memory——memories
去掉of
was going——went
from前加came或者out
since——once
specially——special
them——it
or——and
over——about
最后一句没错吧