Question

2011年泉州中考英语作文，帮我估分。题目BELIEVE IN MYSELF ，词数80 满分15

Believe in myself Believing in myself is my first step on the road to success .Never shall I forget what it has done for me . No matter what difficulties I face , I always believe in myself and make a plan to help me solve the problem easier . No matter when I face trouble , I always believe in myself and never give up , because nothing is difficult to a willing heart . NO matter how strong my enemies are , I always believe myself and try my best to beat them . believe in myself , so that I can fly higher and higher to realize my dream . 有一处涂改，估个具体的分。
满分十五，哪来的十八。

Answer 1

14

Answer 2

评语： 文章行文连贯，文中连接词和过渡词稍欠丰富，内容基本连贯；能熟练使用长难句，文中的长短句搭配合理，此外文中句式变化多样，希望继续努力，再创佳绩；文中用词稍欠丰富，同时未发现学术词汇的使用，作者在拼写方面做得很棒；建议本文在结构上增加一个引言段或一个结尾段。
大约12~13分吧

Answer 3

18

Answer 4

0