Question

求高一英语短文改错高手

每篇十个错，一共有两篇，也就是二十处错误。
第一篇：
It snowed last night.This morning the road covered with snow ,but there we're still a lot bikes coming and going.Suddenly I saw a woman walk off her bike.The woman lied on the ground and couldn't get up.I ranup to her and tried to help her,and she still couldn't stand up because her right leg is broken.At that moment.the policeman came over when he saw this.Immediately,he called at a taxi.The taxi driver sent the woman to nearest hospital.There I telephoned the woman's office and told a man there the wholly story.Seen that the woman was well looked after,I said goodbye to her.Before I left,the lady thanked me again ang again.
第二篇：
When I was doing my homework,the phone rang.She was Jane.She wanted to speak to my older brother.i told her that he had left for home just a few minutes before.Iasked her to ring up again tonight,and she said tjat she wouldn't be free.So I asked her that she'd like to leave a message.Jane said there would be the lecture on English poetry by a visited professor in the Lecture Hall around 6:00 tomorrow evening.And she asked me to tell my brother not be late.She would wait for him at the gate.I told her I would tell him direct came back.
多谢了！！！

Answer 1

等等，我正在改，比较可靠。
第一篇：
It snowed last night.This morning the road 【加was】covered with snow ,but there【we're——were估计你打错了】 still a lot【加of】 bikes coming and going.Suddenly I saw a woman 【walk——fall】 off her bike.The woman 【lied—lay】on the ground and couldn't get up.I ran up to her and tried to help her,【and——but】 she still couldn't stand up because her right leg 【is——was】 broken.At that moment.【the——a】 policeman came over when he saw this.Immediately,he called 【at去掉】 a taxi.The taxi driver sent the woman to【the】 nearest hospital.There I telephoned the woman's office and told a man there the 【wholly—whole】 story.【Seen——Seeing】 that the woman was well looked after,I said goodbye to her.Before I left,the lady thanked me again ang again.
麻烦你再对一下原文，看看是否有打错的，多出了错误处。
第二篇：
When I was doing my homework,the phone rang.【She——It】 was Jane.She wanted to speak to my 【older——elder 】brother.i told her that he had left 【for去掉】 home just a few minutes before.I asked her to ring up again tonight,【and-but】 she said 【tjat _that】she wouldn't be free.So I asked her 【that——if/whether】 she'd like to leave a message.Jane said there would be 【the——a】 lecture on English poetry by a 【visited ——visiting】professor in the Lecture Hall 【at】around 6:00 tomorrow evening.And she asked me to tell my brother not【加to】 be late.She would wait for him at the gate.I told her I would tell him 【direct——directly】【加he 】came back.
原文还是有打错的啊，不过，该改的应该都改出来了。希望能够帮到你！
祝你学习进步，时时开心！O(∩_∩)O~~

Answer 2

1,was covered
2,walk off 改为fall off
3,lay 改为lied
4,is broken 改为 was broken
5,call at ,at 删去
6，nearest 前加the
7,seen 改为seeing

it snowed last night. this morning the road was covered with snow. there were still a lot of bikes coming andgoing.

Suddenly I saw a woman fall off her bike. The woman lay on the ground and couldn't get up. I ran up to her and tried to help her get up. She sat up but still couldn't stand up because her right leg was broken. At that moment, a policeman came over. When he saw this he called a taxi. The taxi driver sent the lady to the nearest hospital. I went with her to the hospital. There I telephoned the woman's office and told a man there the whole story.
Seeing that the lady was well looked after I said goodbye to her. Before I left, the lady thanked me again and again.
对不起~ 这个我把全文打上，你自己找吧

Answer 3

It snowed last night.This morning the road (is) covered with snow ,but there we're still a lot (of)bikes coming and going.Suddenly I saw a woman walk(walking) off her bike.The woman lied on the ground and couldn't get up.I ranup to her and tried to help her,and(but)she still couldn't stand up because her right leg is(was) broken.At that moment.the policeman came over when he saw this.Immediately,he called at a taxi.The taxi driver sent the woman to(the) nearest hospital.There I telephoned the woman's office and told a man there the wholly(whole) story.Seen that the woman was well looked after,I said goodbye to her.Before I left,the lady thanked me again ang again.
第二篇：
When I was doing my homework,the phone rang.She was Jane.She wanted to speak to my older brother.i told her that he had left for home just a few minutes before.Iasked her to ring up again tonight,and she said tjat she wouldn't be free.So I asked her that she'd like to leave a message.Jane said there would be the lecture on English poetry by a visited professor in the Lecture Hall around 6:00 tomorrow evening.And she asked me to tell my brother not be late.She would wait for him at the gate.I told her I would tell him direct came back.