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高三英语，求大神帮忙～一篇语法一篇改错而已～😊

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Answer 1

（这篇短文一共有10个错）为你分析如下：

1. 谓语动词部分不完整 [would be …]

3. 副词用反了          [soon after..]

3. a few  + 名词复数    [ for a few minutes ]

4. 习惯搭配  join sb in sth,[joined then in their talk]   

5. 连词 and  要求平行结构 poor是形容词，所以要跟用

形容词； 此处用-ed分词作形容词。    [ poor and limited]

6. 惯用搭配；makeoneself understood过去分词表示被动的意思；

让别人听懂自己的意思

7. 不定代词错用；  [… someone might  laugh at me]

8. 副词短语“这里…、 那里…”

[a smiling here and an encouraging nod there]

9. 动词时态的错用，将过去的事，要用一般过去时；

Though we spoke only insimple English

尽管我们只会说简单的英语, ..

10. 惯用短语中的有冠词或是没有冠词，都是约定俗成的。

取得更大的进步 = make greater progress [ 所以此处的 a 应当删去]

2017.10.03  过路的热心人回答

Answer 2

It was a beautiful Sunday. Our teacher told us that there would be an English corner after class. I set off soon after the last class in the afternoon.
To my joy, the English corner had just been on for a few minutes. I joined them in their talk. At first, I was afraid that my English was so poor and limited that I couldn’t follow them or make myself understood. I was also afraid that someone might laugh at me. But a smiling face here and an encouraging nod there soon put me at ease. I became bolder and came to speak English with them freely.
The day was unforgettable. I learned a lot of knowledge and made a lot of friends. Through practice, we all improved our English. Though we spoke only in simple English, we all believe that tomorrow we will make greater progress
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