Question

帮我看下英语作文有没有语法错误 不要在意单词拼写

I'm a Chinese student,and I'd like to offer my help.I hope you can keep your word

teathing me English.

I think I can do this well,not only I'm a Chinese,but also I'm very interested in

learning mandarin.My favorate subject is Chinese,I think I can do you a favor.

To speak mandarin well ,I have some advice for you.First, speak mandarin every

morning and every evening.Second ,watch some Chinese films.This can do you a faver.

For exchange ,I want you to talk with me online to correct my pronunciation.I hope

you can introduce some country culture to me.I think it can help me learn English

well.

I'm looking foeward to hearing from you soon

Answer 1

你好！你的文章写得很不错，几乎没有很明显的语法失误。现在对个别表达稍作修改如下，修改处见【】：
I'm a Chinese student,and I'd like to offer my help 【for you to learn Madarine】.I hope you can keep your word teaching me English 【in return 作为回报】.

I think I can do this well,not only【 because】 I'm a Chinese,but also I'm very interested in

learning Mandarin.My favorate subject is Chinese,I think I can do you a favor.

To speak mandarin well ,I have some advice for you.First, speak Mandarin 【every day in the

morning and in the evening】.Second ,watch some Chinese films.This can【 be helpful for your Chinese learning 避免重复使用同样的短语或词汇】

For exchange ,I want you to talk with me online to correct my 【English 】pronunciation.I hope

you can introduce 【the cultures of some countries】 to me.I think it can help me learn English

well.

I'm looking foeward to hearing from you soon.

祝你开心如意！