Question

简单的英语改错'在线等'

共有十处错误'麻烦各位了'。 One afternoon my father and I go fishing on a riverside .We found the water was very dirty that we could not see bottom.We saw some rubbish or deed fish floating on the water so well .That afternoon ,my father and I caught only a smalier fish .Why did fish in the river die ?That was because of a lot of factories along the river always poured it's waste water at and rubbish into the river .In this way ,the water got polluting.Thus,most of the fish in the river was killed.

Answer 1

One afternoon my father and I go fishing on a riverside . “go改成went”
We found the water was very dirty that we could not see bottom. “去掉茄兆was”
We saw some rubbish or deed fish floating on the water so well . “知乎deed改成dead，so改成as”
That afternoon ,my father and I caught only a smalier fish . “smalier 改成small”
Why did fish in the river die ? “在fish前加the”
That was because of a lot of factories along the river always poured it's waste water at and rubbish into the river . “去掉of和at，it's改成their”
In this way ,the water got polluting. “polluting改成搭纳悉polluted”
Thus,most of the fish in the river was killed. 这句对

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Answer 2

One afternoon my father and I （go）棚腊went fishing on a riverside .We found the water was very dirty that we could not see bottom.We saw some rubbish or deed fish <were> floating on the water so well .That afternoon ,my father and I caught only a (smalier)small fish .(Why did fish in the river die ?)Why fish died in the river? That was because of a lot of factories along the river always (poured)pour (it'乱和滑哗腊s)their waste water at and rubbish into the river .In this way ,the water got (polluting)polluted.Thus,most of the fish in the river was killed.