Question

帮我看一下英语作文，语法，通顺性等

Being favour of your company ，I would like to introduce my firend to you to apply for a position 。His nane is Li MIng ，broned in Qi Dong jiangsu China 1980 8 21 。AS a chinese ，he can speak not only English but also has a graet contrel of English。In dittion ，he can take some Janpanses ang German a little well。Having graduate from university ，he bame a lawyer and got married 。He has some experience of there years and all his bosses were satisfied with him 。Getting alone well with people ，being firendly to people and working hardly ，were thought hightly of others。I am looking forward to your early reply。I am sure he will be fit for the position。

Answer 1

Being favour of your company ，I would like to introduce my firend to you to apply for a position（典型的句子冗杂，语法没有大问题，不过这样的表述太中文了） 。His nane(注意拼写啊——name，这样的错误让改的人很无语啊，楼主浏览过一遍么？？？？至少在WORD文档里面检索一下拼写) is Li MIng ，broned in Qi Dong jiangsu China 1980 8 21 （此句想用从句么，有错误啊，拼写就不说了，语法有误啊）。AS a chinese ，he can speak not only English but also has a graet contrel of English（(⊙o⊙)…not only ..but also...是两种不同东西的递进，而不是同一事物的两方面递进，如果是同一事物两方面递进的话，感觉在说情景喜剧）。In dittion （拼写。之后的拼写错误不想说了。。。），he can take（还是用speak吧，或者用HANDLE） some Janpanses ang German a little well（a little well用法好牵强啊。建议改为a little german.拼写啊！！！！）。Having graduate （have 后面加DONE形式。。）from university ，he bame a lawyer and got married（此句时间逻辑有点问题哦。。） 。He has some experience of there years （直接 three years exp...就好了，之前那个表达很纠结啊）and all his bosses were satisfied with him 。Getting alone （along...拼写！！！）well with people ，being firendly to people and working hardly（表达很牵强） ，were thought hightly （拼写错）of others（此句太纠结了，语法有误了）。I am looking forward to your early reply（表达很不地道，感觉像是直接一一对照汉字在翻译）。I am sure he will be fit for the position。

Answer 2

As my friend is in avour of your company,he would like to apply to you for a position 。His name is Li MIng ，born in Qi Dong Jiangsu, China on August 21st,1980 。Though a chinese national ，he can speak not only Chinese but also has a good command of English。In addition ，he can speak some Janpanse and German After graduating from university ，he became a lawyer and got married 。He has there years' work experience and all his bosses are satisfied with him 。Getting alone well with people ，being firendly to people and working hard, he is thought highly of by others。I am looking forward to your early reply。I am sure he will be fit for the position he applies to。

Answer 3

I would like to introduce my friend to you for a position. His name is Li Ming, borned in Qidong at August 21st 1980.As a Chinese, he can not only speak English but also can control it. In addition, he know a little Janpanese and German. Having graduate from university, he got married and became a lawyer. Getting along well with others and working hard, he gathered some experience and satisfied his boss. I am looking forward to your reply. I am sure he is fit for the position.