Question

求写一篇英语作文，不要复制或者用翻译软件翻译的哦，谢谢拉。高分，回答的好的加分哈，麻烦各位了。

第一段：在现在这个科技飞速发展的时代，电脑在人们的生活中发挥着越来越重要的作用。
第二段：笔记本电脑因为体积小巧、轻便，日益受到年轻人的喜爱。笔记本电脑便于携带，方便我们及时了解各方面的信息，查阅各种资料。在紧张的学习生活之外，还可以看看电影，听听音乐，使我们的日常生活更加丰富多彩。但是带来方便的同时，笔记本电脑还给我们带来很多负面影响，例如很多的青少年沉迷于网络游戏，不仅伤害身体健康还浪费时间，有些人在上课的时间也在玩电脑，耽误了学业，也辜负了父母们的期望。
第三段：依我之见，对我们而言，笔记本电脑对我们的学习有很大的好处，但是要善于利用，不要只沉迷于其中的娱乐，不然只会害了自己。

Answer 1

不翻译语法错误可能会很多，高一水平de ，我试试吧
Today ,computer in the life of people playing more and more important role.
Laptop computers for small size, light,so young people like it very much.Notebook computer easy to carry, . convenient for us to understand the different information.In the course of intense study life outside , we can also watching movies,listen music.it make our life colourful.But bring convenient at the same time, the also bring us many negative impacts.For example a lot of teenagers addicted to the network game, not only harm the body health but also is a waste of time, some people in the class time is also playing computer, the delay academic, also failed to live up to his parents' expectations.
In my opinion, notebook computer has a lot of advantages,We need to be good at using, don't wallow in entertainment, that will only hurt yourself.
我已经到有道上校正过了，问题不大吧。。。。毕竟只有高一水品啊。。
希望对你有帮助。。O(∩_∩)O~

Answer 2

Nowadays, with the development of science and technology ,laptop plays a more and more important role in our daily life.
laptop is enough charming to draw any young guy's attention because of its small figure and lightweight,and it makes us more convenients since it can help us in information searching.Beside,we can use the laptop to listen music and watch film.All of this brings a more colourful life to us.
But,at the same time,we can not ignoer the negative influence it makes.For instance,many students are addicted in the on-line games wich does harm to their heathy and waste the valuable time,some of them even play the games during the class time so that theri school work are delayed which dispoint thei parents.
as far as i'mconcerned, every coin has two sides, the laptop can be useful to our study if we treat it in a corret way.only we take the most use of it,we can benefit from it.

自己刚写的，非在线翻译，这里从句比较多，求仔细比较后采纳。O(∩_∩)O~

Answer 3

The first paragraph : In this age of rapid development of science and technology, computers are playing an increasingly important role in people's lives.
The second paragraph : The Laptop becomes more and more popular among young people because its compact design and light weight.The laptop is easy to carry, it helps us to keep up on current news on all aspects and check information in time.
Besides busy lives of studying,it can also enrich our daily lives when we use it for watching movies and listening to music.But while it brings us convenience,the laptop also has some negative influences on us.For example,a lot of teenagers are addicted to online games,it is harmful to health and a huge waste of time.Some students even play with computers in class,neglect their studies and disappoint their parents.
Third paragraph : In my opinion, the laptop is very useful for our studies.But we should put it to good use instead of only using it for entertainment,or else it will only ruin our lives.

手工翻译，望采纳：）

Answer 4

With the development of the society,the computer has been playing an increasing role in our life.
Notebook become pupular because of its tiny and convenience inrecently.The notebook is easy to take so as to get all aspects of information and find all kinds of material in time.
After class,we can watch movie and listen to music in notebook and make our daily life more colorful .But bring convenient at the same time, the laptop also bring us many negative impacts.For instence,many teenagers piay online games .It not only bad for health but also waste time.Some students piay computer games during the class.It not only bad for study but also failed to live up to his parents' expectations.
As far as I'm concerned,the laptop is good for our study.But we should use it reasonable.Don't just wallow in entertainment, or will only hurt yourself. Don't just wallow in entertainment, or will hurt yourself.

Answer 5

The first paragraph: now this technology in an age of rapid development, the computer in the life of people a more and more important role in the second period: laptop computers for volume is small and exquisite compact, is being young people's favorite laptop easy to carry, convenient for us to realize the different information, refer to all kinds of material in the tension of study and life, but also can see movies, listen to music, make our daily life more colorful but bring convenient at the same time, the laptop also bring us a lot of negative effects, such as a lot of teenagers addicted to the network game, not only harm the body health is a waste of time, some people in the class time is also playing computer, the delay academic, also failed to live up to the expectations of the parents the third paragraph: in my opinion, for us, for our study notebook computer has a lot of advantages, but want to be good at using, don't wallow in entertainment, or will only hurt yourself