Question

英文翻译，看看有没有语法错误！谢谢了

Long ago, you are zombie with a bulletproof heart. Until you met Helena, warming you bulletproof heart! Helena is pretty girl, like a star on sky. but she was dead! Day after day, you must keep on living without her. Her spirit will be go on.
中文：
很久以前，你是一个拥有防弹的心的僵尸。知道你遇见了helena，温暖你防弹的心。helena是个漂亮的女孩，就像天上的星星。但是她已经死了。以后的日子里，没有她，你必须继续活着，她的精神将在你身上传递下去。

麻烦看看有没有语法错误，不通顺的地方还请改正！谢谢
我要的英文！是把中文翻译成英文！

Answer 1

Long ago,you were a zombie with a bulletproof heart.Unitl you met Helena,she warmed your bulletproof heart! Helena is a pretty girl,like a star in the sky.But she is now dead!Day after day,you must keep on leaving without her.Her spirit will be passed on you.

Answer 2

@1：long TIME ago @2：you are zombie who with a bulletprroof vest surrounded your
heart @3:warming your heart (把中间bulletproof去了) @4：she is a pretty girl ,just like a beautiful shiny star @5: her spirit is on you you ,forever

Answer 3

Long ago, you are zombie with a bulletproof heart. Until you met Helena, warming you bulletproof heart! Helena is pretty girl, just like a star on sky. but she died! The days after you must keep on living without her. Her spirit will be go on.