Question

请英语好的朋友帮助纠正一下翻译错误：“当我知道这门课的成绩的时候，我感到震惊和绝望。我不。。。”

（中文是想要表达的意思，翻译不必和中文完全一样）

中文部分：
当我知道这门课的成绩的时候，我感到震惊和绝望。我不知道这个成绩是否已经考虑到了我的“special consideration.”我希望你能够将我的“special consideration”以及我对这门课程的实际掌握情况，复议我的成绩并且让我通过这门考试。

我的翻译：
When I got the result of this subject, I was shocked and despair. I don't know if this result has already considered my special consideration. I beg you could reconsider my special consideration and my real knowledge about this subject, review my result and let me pass this subject.

Answer 1

When I got to know the result of this course, I was shocked and despair. I
don't know whether my particular situation has been taken into consideration. I beg you to kindly take into your consideration my particular situation and how I am getting on with the course studies, give an enquiry on my test result and let me pass the test. Thank you in advance!