Question

高一英语！短文改错！能改几个改几个！帮帮忙啊~

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Answer 1

答案类似，看着改吧 Mr. Johnson is a hardworking teacher. Every day, he spends too much time with his work. With little sleep and hardly any break, so he works from morning till night. Hard work have made him very ill. “He has ruined his healthy. We are worried about him.” That is which other teachers say. Yesterday afternoon. I paid visit to Mr. Johnson. I was eager to see him, but outside her room I stopped. I had to calm myself down. Quietly I step into the room. I saw him lying in bed, looking at some of the picture we had taken to gether. I understood that he missed us just as many as we missed him.
1.【答案】Every day, he spends too much time with his work.
with改成on
【解析】spend some time on sth.
2.【答案】With little sleep and hardly any break, so he works from morning till night.
把so删掉
【解析】上文不是句子，是with独立主格结构，故下文不可以用连词连接句子。
3.【答案】Hard work have made him very ill.
have改成has
【解析】主语为 “Hard w ork”为单数。
4.【答案】He has ruined his healthy.
healthy改成health
【解析】代词所有格要修饰名尺消词。
5.【答案】That is which other teachers say.
which改成what
【解析】既要引导表语从句又要在从句中作宾语，只有“what”具有这种双重功能。
6.【答案】Yesterday afternoon，I paid visit to Mr. health a Johnson.
在visit前加 a
【解析】pay a visit to为固定搭配。
7.【答案】I was eager to see him, but outside her room I stopped.
her改成his
【解析】代词指代的是Mr. Johnson为男性，所以要将“her”改成“his”。
8.【答案】Quietly I step into the room.
step改成stepped
【陵指知解析】讲的是过去的事逗租，要用一般过去时。
9.【答案】I saw him lying in bed, looking at some of the picture we had taken together.
picture→pictures
【解析】some of the picture说明不止一副画。
10.【答案】I understood that he missed us just as many as we missed him.
much→much
【解析】as many as意为“多达”是从数上面来说的。as much as意为“像……一样”表示程度。

Answer 2

第二吵敏源行拿带with→on
三have ha
worry about
quiet→quietly
picture→pictures
many →升态much

Answer 3

第一行 hard-working

追答

spends

第二行 with改成on

so去掉

till改成to

has made