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MydreamInfiveyears,Iwanttobeapoliceman.BecauseIthinkpolicemenareverymightyandhandsome...
My dream
In five years ,I want to be a policeman.Because I think policemen are very mighty and handsome ,so I want to be a policeman in my future.When I was a ten-year-old child,I wanted to be a doctor. Because they can help cure patients,and they work in the hispital. So I had a lot of dream. But now I want to be a vet, because I love animals . I often play with animals.Vets can look after animals and they can work with animals every day. I believe I can be a vet in my future because it is my dream.
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In five years ,I want to be a policeman.Because I think policemen are very mighty and handsome ,so I want to be a policeman in my future.When I was a ten-year-old child,I wanted to be a doctor. Because they can help cure patients,and they work in the hispital. So I had a lot of dream. But now I want to be a vet, because I love animals . I often play with animals.Vets can look after animals and they can work with animals every day. I believe I can be a vet in my future because it is my dream.
如果可以帮我在凑到总共200词，好的再加20分 展开
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