Question

急！这里有两篇英语作文希望可以找出语法错误之类总之求纠正

One day,Tom decided to play a trick.He carried a long rope,and stopped a man and alady on the pavement.He asked they to help him with worry on his face but joy in his heart. And he explained thet he was doing a school project which is measure the building.So he hope they can help him and the project just for a few mintues.They all glad to help the young boy.Tom went around the corner and asked they to hold one end of the rope.Then he went away and left the two people.The two people could not see each other so waited and waited.Tom hid behind a fence and watched.He told his friend Ben that he is playing a trick.And they all laughed at them.Aunt was angry about Tom and came up behind them.She asked Tom to stop this boring trick.

Three boys was fishing near Seaview Island, suddenly Suddenly, the water flooded the boat,and the engine could not start.They shouted for help when the other boat which passed by.But nobody give a hand to them,so they tried to start the engine again.Luckily,the engine started quckily. At last, they all went back to the Harbor safely.
what a exciting day!
英语除了作文都还好= =、期中作文虽然拿了91％的分数但是作文弱爆了只有5分啊我去... 到10点为止 球！！

Answer 1

我只有翻译
一天，汤姆决定玩一个把戏。他带着一根长绳，并停止了一个男人和一位女士在人行道上。他问他们帮他担心他脸上的喜悦在他的心。他解释说，他在学校的项目，是衡量建筑。他希望他们能帮助他和项目只是几分钟。他们都很乐意帮助年轻的男孩。汤姆走到拐角处，要求他们把绳子的一端。然后他走了，离开了两个人。两人都看不到对方，所以等了又等。汤姆躲在篱笆看。他告诉他的朋友，他是在开玩笑。他们都嘲笑他们。阿姨很生气，汤姆走到他们后面。她问汤姆停止这种无聊的把戏。
三个男孩正在钓鱼的海景岛附近，突然，水淹船，发动机不能启动。他们大声呼救时，其他的船经过。但是没有人帮助他们，所以他们试图再次起动发动机。幸运的是，发动机开始好。最后，他们都回到了港口安全。一个令人兴奋的一天！
【你看一下译文有什么错误，再对照英文找出错处就OK了~】

Answer 2

One day,Tom decided to play a trick.He carried a long rope,and stopped a man and a lady on the pavement.He asked them to help him with a worried look on his face but joy in his heart. And he explained that he was doing a school project which was to measure the building.So he hoped they could help him and the project just for a few mintues.They were all glad to help the young boy.Tom went around the corner and asked them to hold one end of the rope.Then he went away and left the two people there.The two people could not see each other so they waited and waited.Tom hid behind a fence and watched them.He told his friend Ben that he was playing a trick.And they all laughed at them.Aunt was angry withTom so she came over to them.She asked Tom to stop this boring trick.

Three boys were fishing near Seaview Island, Suddenly, the water flooded the boat,and the engine could not start.They shouted to another boat for help which was passing by.But nobody gave a hand to them,so they tried to start the engine again.Luckily,the engine started quckily. At last, they all went back to the Harbor safely.
what an exciting day! 写完作文应多检查，祝你学习愉快 望采纳

追问

pass by是短暂性动词 应该直接是+ed吧? 而且要加+be = =!?

追答

这里是定语从句修饰先行词boat , 表示向正从旁边经过的另一首船求助，与短暂性和延续性无关，且不用被动结构

Answer 3

He asked them to help him with worry on his face but joy in his heart. And he explained that he was doing a school project which is measuring the building.So he hoped they can helped him and the project just for a few mintues.They all were glad to help the young boy.Tom went around the corner and asked them to hold one end of the rope.Then he went away and left behind the two people.The two people could not see each other so they waited for a long time.Tom hid behind a fence and watched.He told his friend Ben that he was playing a trick.And they all laughed at them.Aunt was angry with Tom .She asked Tom to stop this boring trick.

Three boys were fishing near Seaview Island, Suddenly, the water flooded the boat,and the engine could not start.They shouted for help when the other boat passed by.But nobody give a hand to them,so they tried to start the engine again.Luckily,the engine was started quckily. At last, they all went back to the Harbor safely.
what an exciting day!

Answer 4

One day,Tom decided to play a trick.He carried a long rope,and stopped a man and a lady on the pavement.He asked them to help him with worry on his face but joy in his heart. And he explained that he was doing a school project which is measure the building.So he hope they can help him with the project just in a few mintues.They were all glad to help the young boy.Tom went around the corner and asked them to hold one end of the rope.Then he went away and left the two people.The two people could not find each other so they waited and waited.Tom hide behind a fence and watched.He told his friend Ben that he was playing a trick.And they all laughed at them.Aunt was angry with Tom and came up behind them.She asked Tom to stop this boring trick.

Three boys was fishing near Seaview Island, Suddenly, the water flooded the boat,and the engine could not start.They shouted for help when the other boat which passed by.But nobody give a hand to them,so they tried to start the engine again.Luckily,the engine started quckily. At last, they all went back to the Harbor safely.
what an exciting day!