Question

the country relys overly on the tourist industry to develop local economy， which will lead to

the country relys overly on the tourist industry to develop local economy，
which will lead to unbalanced economic development 这句话对吗 谢谢各位大神了

Answer 1

有几处小错误：
1.rely的第三人称单数形式是relies；
2.overly作为副词修饰谓语动词最好放在位于之前，并且在这里rely on是固定词组，最好还不要拆开的好；
3.“local economy”、“ unbalanced economic development”分别加了定冠词the；

The country overly relies on the tourist industry to develop the local economy，
which will lead to the unbalanced economic development.
简单译一下：这个国家过于依赖于旅游业发展当地经济就会导致经济发展不平衡。

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Answer 2

tourist 指的是游客， 而旅行业应该用 “tourism"
我觉得下面这样比较贴切，
"the country relys overly on the tourism industry, which will lead to an unbalanced economic structure."