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Istillrememberthathappenedtomeonedaywheniwaseight.ThedayIamplayingwithmysix-year-oldb... I still remember that happened to me one day when i was eight.The day I am playing with my six-year-old brother,Jack,in the woods near our house.Sudden I fell into a trap.G became very frightening at that time,and such did jack.Our parents were not at home.Jack told me wait.Then he ran away and after a while came back with a long rope.She tired one end of the rope to a tree nearby and threw the other ends to me.Then I climbed down the rope and got out of the trap .I thanked Jack.It was he,my brother of six,who helped me out of the troubie.
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I still remember (that改成what) happened to me one day when I was eight. The day I (am改成was) playing with my six-year-old brother, Jack, in the woods near our house. (Sudden改成Suddenly) I fell into a trap. I became very (frightening改成frightened) at that time, and (such改成so) did Jack. Our parents were not at home. Jack told me (加入to) wait. Then he ran away and after a while came back with a long rope. (She改成He) tied one end of the rope to a tree nearby and threw the other (ends改成end) to me. Then I climbed (down改成up) the rope and got out of the trap. I thanked Jack. It was he, my brother of six, who helped me out of (去掉the) trouble.

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I still remember which happened to me one day when i was eight.The day I was playing with my six-year-old brother,Jack,in the woods near our house.Suddenly I felt into a trap.G became very frightening at that time,and such did Jack.Our parents were not at home.Jack told me to wait.Then he ran away.After a while he came back with a long rope.He tired one end of the rope to a tree nearby and threw the other end to me.Then I climbed up with the rope and got out of the trap .I thanked Jack.It was he,my brother of six,who helped me get out of the trouble.
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