Question

请一位英语高手大神帮我把这段原文写一下http://v.youku.com/v_show/id_XMjA5ODAyNTIw.html

我需要模仿和参加比赛，真的很需要
http://v.youku.com/v_show/id_XMjA5ODAyNTIw.html

Answer 1

你要整篇原文咩...
我尽量吧...
First I have to admit that I have some doubt about the question mark, because I think it shall not be here. Perhaps other contestants believe that one plus one is not two or not only two, but I'm here addressing this speech to call for recognition and revaluation of one simple and clear principle of nature: one plus one does equal two. (No doubt about it) Then why do we hate this simple equation? Perhaps some of us are too ignorant to realize the importance, so we tend to misinterpret into a barrier of fresh ideas(这句话后半句我不确定 觉得怪怪的)or we never encounter flaws of the education system, the overwhelming disatisfaction(这个词不确定)...后面听不清。 Apparently, those reasons seem ridiculous, but you may put eyes down on the table quoting this famous saying "imagination is more important than knowledge as evidence to prove me wrong." However, Einstein did not invent a theory of electivity(这个词不确定）; he discovered it through years of hard work proving calculation more critically ...
对不起啊po主我实在不想听下去了..
总之如果po主要参加类似的比赛取的好成绩
第一模仿语音语调可取但是模仿演讲材料绝对不可取
第二要找到新颖的有争论的点子 不如说该不该支持abortion啊或者在中国是不是也应该实行电影分级啊之类的
第三要材料充分 准备演讲就好像想象有人在和你debate 想到所有能拨到你的观点的问题并且在你的演讲中一一回答清楚
第四就是要有thesis这个很重要的 其实我觉得这个人在thesis的提出方面做的很好 但是prove方面就一般了
第五捏可以用一些名人名句了之类的
我把我的邮箱留下 po主你写好稿子可以发给我看看之类的如果po主愿意
caokun19960906@163.com

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因为我看了所有的英文演讲比赛 这个风格是我最接受 近似我的风格
融会贯通这个以后会对我的准备有很大的帮助，如果你有时间的话 还请当听写材料帮下我 万分感激了！！！