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Theweekendiscoming!Iwillbesobusyasabee.OntheSaturdaymorning,Ihavetorushtomymathclass.... The weekend is coming! I will be so busy as a bee .On the Saturday morning,I have to rush to my math class.After it is fishing,I will have a dance class.I like danceing because it gives myself a chance to shape my body.I will pay a visit for my grandma on sunday.I am look forward to that moment!I am surely we will have a good time.On Sunday night,I will watch my favourite programs TV "HAPPY CAMP".I find it really interesting.It always makes me laugh out loud.Besides.a lot stars appear in it. 展开
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The weekend is coming! I will be (so改成as) busy as a bee. On (去掉the) Saturday morning, I have to rush to my math class. After it is (fishing改成finished), I will have a dance class. I like dancing because it gives (myself改成me) a chance to shape my body. I will pay a visit (for改成to) my grandma on Sunday. I am (look改成looking) forward to that moment! I am (surely改成sure) we will have a good time. On Sunday night, I will watch my favourite (programs改成program) (加入on) TV "HAPPY CAMP". I find it really interesting. It always makes me laugh out loud. Besides, a lot (加入of) stars appear in it.

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The weekend is coming! I will so busy as a bee .On Saturday morning,I have to rush my math class.After fishing,I will have a dance class.I like danceing because it gives a chance to shape my body.I will pay a visit for my grandma on sunday.I am look forward to that moment!I am surely we will have a good time.On Sunday night,I will watch my favourite programs TV "HAPPY CAMP".I find it really interesting.It always makes me laugh out loudly.Besides.a lot stars appear in it.
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