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Yesterday my parents and I went to our home village because of my grandmother had a birthday.This year he is seventy years older.In the morning,we went there by car and then we went to a photo studio.There we all put up the clothes like people wore in the Tang Dynasty and take a family picture.At noon,we entered a restaurant,and we ordering long life noodles and another foods that must be prepared.Then we congratulated her on her seventy birthday. I wished my grandmother good health and long life.After lunch,we came back.What a wonderful day we had!

Answer 1

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Yesterday my parents and I went to our home village because (去掉of) my grandmother had a birthday.This year (he改成she) is seventy years (older改成old). In the morning, we went there by car and then we went to a photo studio. There we all put (up改成on) the clothes (like改成as) people wore in the Tang Dynasty and (take改成took) a family picture. At noon, we entered a restaurant, and we (ordering改成ordered) long life noodles and (another改成other) foods that must be prepared. Then we congratulated her on her (seventy改成seventieth) birthday. I wished my grandmother good health and (加入a) long life. After lunch, we came back. What a wonderful day we had!

1. because of加名词或代词，而because才能加原因状语从句；
2. grandmother是女性，而he指男性；
3. older为比较级，但是此处无比较含义；
4. put on 床上；put up 挂上；举起；建起
5. like加名词或代词做宾语，as才能加从句
6. take做谓语，但是全文基本上都是用过去时，所以改成过去式took
7. order做句子谓语，但是单独的ordering不能做谓语，改成过去式ordered即可
8. another后面单独加的是名词的单数，other才能加名词复数形式
9. “某人多少岁生日”时用序数词，不能用基数词
10. life表示“生命”时是可数名词，前面要加冠词

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Answer 2

1. because of my grandmother had a birthday改为because my grandmother had a birthday
because of 后只能接宾语，because 才为从句。
2.This year he is seventy years older.改为This year he is seventy years old.
只需用old 修饰 seventy years ，older前面并无than等词语
3.There we all put up the clothes like people wore in the Tang Dynasty and take a family picture
改为There we all put up the clothes like people wore in the Tang Dynasty and took a family picture
原句为过去时！take 改为 took。
4. we ordering long life noodles and another foods that must be prepared.
改为 we ordered long life noodles and another foods that must be prepared.
原句无谓语动词，将ordering改为ordered。
5.Then we congratulated her on her seventy birthday.改为Then we congratulated her on her seventieth birthday.
应用序数词seventieth修饰birthday，而不是seventy