2013-05-07
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e。。。语法错误什么的不少,我也只是初四的,望见谅啊。。。议论文第一段Nowadays,more and more students like Internet .They play computer games day and night even stay up all night .Then,we as a middle school student should on the network or not?现在越来越多的学生喜欢网络。他们日日夜夜在网上玩游戏甚至彻夜不眠。那么,我们作为一个中学生是否应该上网呢? 第二段I think we shouldn't.(听老师说第二段先把自己的观点讲明)我认为我们不应该。Because the Internet can make our mark below soon .因为网络会使我们的成绩下降很快。And it can bring some bad information to us .还有它可以给我们带来负面的消息。It can give effect to our body and mind.这会给我们的身心带来影响。On the other hand,some students chat on the QQ and meet some e-pals.另一方面,一些学生在球球上面聊天见网友。It makes people worried very much.这非常令人担忧。Some students are so lazy that look for the homework answer on the network.一些学生很懒以至于到网上去找作业答案。It can make them become lazier,lose the ability to think and study worse.这会让他们变得更懒丧失思考的能力然后学习变更糟。 第三段 (总结说的话)So,I think we shouldn't always on the Internet.At least now. 所以,我认为我们不应该总是上网。至少现在。 俄。。。听老师讲呢,说要说利就说利,要说弊就说弊,不要利也有弊也有,会让人觉得方向很乱,利就利到底。赫赫。。。写得错误百出,望您见谅
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