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在线求指导：书面表达。 根据

书面表达。 根据调查数据显示,我国肥胖儿童人数以每年8%的速度递增,实在令人担忧.最近,你校将组织题为"谁应对肥胖儿童负责"的英文辩论会,你将作为辩手参加.根据下面辩论的内容,写出你的发言稿(代表一方--正方或反方)。 题目和开头已给出,但不计入总词数.词数120左右。 Who is to blame for the obese children-the enterprises or the parents? The number of obese children in our country is increasing by 8 percent each year.People are very concerned about it. In my opinion,

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One possible version(反方):                                               Who is to blame for the obese children                                                  -the enterprises or the parents? The number of obese children in our country is increasing by 8 percent each year.People are very concerned about it.In my opinion,parents are to blame.First,the parents often take their children to find fast food restaurants with the excuse that they are too busy to prepare meals for their children at home,so gradually their children have formed a bad eating habit.Another reason,I think,is that the parents can't tell junk foods from nutritious foods so that they can't help their children to make a right choice.Besides,most of the time the parents ignore how important it is for their children to take regular exercise.That's why their children put on weight so easily.I suggest that parents should pay attention to their children's health and help them to make a wise choice of what to eat and what to do. Another possible version(正方):                                                    Who is to blame for the obese children                                                       -the enterprises or the parents? The number of obese children in our country is increasing by 8 percent each year.People are very concerned about it.In my opinion,enterprises are to blame.First,for the purpose of making money,they have built so many western style fast food restaurants.The fast foods are known for containing too much fat.Secondly,some catering(food)industries sell junk foods and there are no laws to stop them from doing so.And besides,so many advertisements attract children to the foods that are delicious but actually unhealthy.All these factors are the causes of the large number of obese children in China. I suggest that strict laws should be made to forbid selling unhealthy foods.It's only when laws are made that the situation will be improved.Children are our future and we should do something to make sure that they grow healthy and strong.