Question

帮忙修改一下英语作文

Answer 1

标题加A;第一行，去掉is；第二行，make后加a,me后加to；第三行，I
make
card
spend
two
hours可改为i
spent
two
hours
on
the
card.第四行去掉o'clock
；Childhood
is
the
name
of
book改为the
book's
name
is
Childhood.再两句Some
of
them后加are。全文时态改为过去时

Answer 2

Today，I
got
up
late.I
got
up
at
half
past
eight.
After
breakfast，
I
had
to
make
a
family
tree
card.
I
thought
it
was
easy
for
me
，but
now
I
think
it's
very
diffcult
.
I
spent
two
hours
in
making
the
card.
Then
I
watched
TV.
I
became
hungry
soon.I
had
lunch
at
twelve
o'clock.
I
ate
roast
fish，vegetables，rice
and
sheep
soup
for
lunch.
I
read
a
book
at
one
o'clock
p.m.
Its
name
is
Childhood
.At
three
o'clock，mother
and
I
played
compurter
games.
I
wrote
an
essay
in
my
QQspace.Mother
and
I
went
to
stadium
at
four
o'clock.。There
were
many
people
in
it.
Some
of
them
were
running
and
some
of
them
playing
basketball.Mother
and
I
played
badminton
.
It
was
fun.I
was
the
winner.
我相信这是一篇记述我的一天的日记，那些事情已经发生了，所以总体上要用过去时态

Answer 3

A
Happy
Day
Today，I
got
up
late.I
got
up
at
half
past
eight.
After
breakfast，
I
had
to
make
family
tree
card.
I
think
it
was
easy
for
me
to
make，but
now
I
think
it
was
very
diffcult
.
I
spent
two
hours
making
the
card.
Then
I
watched
TV.
I
was
hungry
soon.I
had
lunch
at
twelve
o'clock.
I
had
roast
fish，vegetables，rice
and
sheep
soup
for
lunch.
I
read
a
book
at
one
o'clock
p.m.Childhood
is
the
name
of
the
book.At
three
o'clock，mother
and
I
played
compurter
games.
I
wrote
an
essay
in
my
QQspace.Mother
and
I
went
to
stadium
at
four
o'clock.。There
were
many
people
in
it.
Some
of
them
ran，some
of
them
played
basketball.Mother
and
I
palyed
badminton
.
It
was
funny.I’m
the
winner.
整篇文章应该用过去时态的，因为你在写这篇文章的时候，事情已经是发生完的了

Answer 4

i
got
up
late
at
half
past
eight.i
thought
it
easy
for
me,
but
now
i
yhink
it
very
difficult.
It
took
me
2hours
for
card.
THen
i
watched
TV
and
felt
hungry
soon,so
i
ate
roast
fish，vegetables，rice
and
sheep
soup
as
lunch
at
12
o'clock.i
read
book
named
childhood
at
one
p.m.
mother
and
i
played
computer
games
at
3
p.m.
i
wrote
.......主要是把里面的动词都改成过去时
因为你已经作了