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DearJennifer,ThankyouverymuchforthewonderfulpresentyougavemeformybirthdaylastSaturday...
Dear Jennifer,
Thank you very much for the wonderful present you gave me for my birthday last Saturday. It was nice of you to come and see me, and I was so surprised that you had bought me a present. When I opened it I saw it was just the kind of thing I had always wanted. I like the colors and the shape of the frame. I will hang it in my bedroom, It was so nice of you.
I am in senior middle school now, at this moment I am very busy with my studies. I work hard here. My results are getting better and better.
How about you? You told me last week you had started piano lessons. I would like to come over some time and hear you play.
Well, I don’t want to make it too long today. I have to run to the post office and get this letter posted.
Thanks again for the present and hope to see you soon.
Love,
Kathy Huang
这是一封感谢信，帮我看看内容有错吗？格式不用看。如果有语法错误，请帮我修改一下。谢谢。主要看这几句话对吗?
1.It was nice of you to come and see me
2.My results are getting better and better.
3.I would like to come over some time and hear you play.
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Thank you very much for the wonderful present you gave me for my birthday last Saturday. It was nice of you to come and see me, and I was so surprised that you had bought me a present. When I opened it I saw it was just the kind of thing I had always wanted. I like the colors and the shape of the frame. I will hang it in my bedroom, It was so nice of you.
I am in senior middle school now, at this moment I am very busy with my studies. I work hard here. My results are getting better and better.
How about you? You told me last week you had started piano lessons. I would like to come over some time and hear you play.
Well, I don’t want to make it too long today. I have to run to the post office and get this letter posted.
Thanks again for the present and hope to see you soon.
Love,
Kathy Huang
这是一封感谢信，帮我看看内容有错吗？格式不用看。如果有语法错误，请帮我修改一下。谢谢。主要看这几句话对吗?
1.It was nice of you to come and see me
2.My results are getting better and better.
3.I would like to come over some time and hear you play.
或许帮我另编一段询问对方近况的内容，可以吗？ 展开
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Dear Jennifer,
Thank you very much for the wonderful present you gave to me last Saturday for my birthday. It was nice of you for coming to see me, and I was so surprised that you had bought me a present. After I opened it, I found it was just the kind of thing that I had always wanted. I like the color and the shape of the frame. I will hang it in my bedroom. It was so nice of you.
I am in senior middle school now. At this moment I am very busy with my studies. I work hard here. My grades are getting better and better.
How about you? You told me last week you had started piano lessons. I would like to come over sometime and appreciate your performance.
Well, I don’t want to make my letter too long today. I have to run to the post office and send this letter out.
Thanks again for the present and I hope to see you soon.
Love,
Kathy Huang
Thank you very much for the wonderful present you gave to me last Saturday for my birthday. It was nice of you for coming to see me, and I was so surprised that you had bought me a present. After I opened it, I found it was just the kind of thing that I had always wanted. I like the color and the shape of the frame. I will hang it in my bedroom. It was so nice of you.
I am in senior middle school now. At this moment I am very busy with my studies. I work hard here. My grades are getting better and better.
How about you? You told me last week you had started piano lessons. I would like to come over sometime and appreciate your performance.
Well, I don’t want to make my letter too long today. I have to run to the post office and send this letter out.
Thanks again for the present and I hope to see you soon.
Love,
Kathy Huang
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